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Profile evaluation please

by mbaflight » Thu Jul 30, 2009 4:55 am
Thank you for all your help.

I am 25 years old , Asian, female

Academics:
Bachelor of Arts with first division
Master of Arts with first division
GMAT: 720 - Q49 V38 AWA 6.0

Work Experience: Upon matriculation, I will have 3 years of work ex

1 year in market research (under WPP), as a qualitative researcher
Accomplishments:
Handled domestic and international clients
Active during analysis and presentation
Received accolades for moderation

2.2 years in family business: commodity trading (foodgrains in the north eastern region of India)
Accomplishments:
Because it is a small firm, I am active in all the functions from finance to operation
Since joined, have opened another branch

Future Goal
Short – term: return back to the firm and introduce a packaged products(of commodity) line too

Long – term: along with previous, i want to start my own organization that functions as a bridge between academics and NGO’s

Reason for MBA: a non-business background , want to be prepared for future challenges

Extracurricular: good

Things i want to ask,
I’m looking at Michigan Ross, Haas, U T Austin . Is this achievable, assuming good essays
Is being Indian and being into a family business over-represented in the applicant pool. Please do let me know your thoughts

Thank you once again.

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by Cindy Tokumitsu » Fri Jul 31, 2009 6:01 am
Hello,

It looks like you’d be qualified for the programs you mention (considering them reasonable reaches). Being Indian you are definitely in an over-represented group, but you have some factors that make you stand out, such as your family business (its nature, not the fact of it being a family business). With strong applications I believe you’d have a chance at the schools you mention.

The challenge I see is different – a lack of connection between your current work, your short-term goals, and your long-term goals. They seem to be three separate things with little on the surface anyway that weaves them into a coherent picture. This point is something you should work out before you write the applications.

Best regards,
Cindy Tokumitsu
Senior Editor, Accepted.com
www.Accepted.com

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thank you cindy

by mbaflight » Sat Aug 01, 2009 1:53 am
thank you so much ...

my future goals are to return back to india and diversify my commodity trading business.

along with this i would like to start a non-profit organization that enables individuals from schools/university to engage on a regular basis with NGO's.

once again thank you.