sentence correction from ETS- land values

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sentence correction from ETS- land values

by wawatan » Wed May 28, 2008 7:25 pm
Last year, land values in most parts of the pinelands
rose almost so fast, and in some parts even faster than
what they did
outside the pinelands.
(A) so fast, and in some parts even faster than what
they did
(B) so fast, and in some parts even faster than, those
(C) as fast, and in some parts even faster than, those
(D) as fast as, and in some parts even faster than,
those
(E) as fast as, and in some parts even faster than what
they did

stuck between D and E.

OA is D

Any suggestions?

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by simplyjat » Wed May 28, 2008 7:36 pm
I will go with D. E contains "they" without a clear referent.
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I'm stuck as well !!

by rdadbhawala » Wed May 28, 2008 8:19 pm
D does not use the comparative form "faster" as well as E. But, if I remove the sentence between the two commas, it should still hold. And that happens with option D.

I think I'm going with option D.

Last year, land values in most parts of the pinelands rose almost as fast as (, and in some parts even faster than,) those outside the pinelands.
khudi ko kar buland itna, ke har taqdeer se pehle,
khuda bandae se khud puchhe, ke bataa, teri razaa kya hai ...
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by vishalsongra » Wed May 28, 2008 10:04 pm
I will also go with D ...

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by chidcguy » Thu May 29, 2008 7:12 am
D.

Agree with rdadbhawala ans simplyjat

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by munuchwa01 » Thu May 21, 2009 2:18 am
Correct idiom is:

as fast as
OR
so fast that

Also, D has the correct structure wherein if the sentence within the comma is removed, it still makes a complete sentence.

Therefore D is the right answer.

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by sudeep_ar » Fri May 22, 2009 12:28 am
Definitely D