At the annualstock holders meeting, investors heard a presentation on the numerous challenges facing the company, including among them the threat from a rival's multi-billion dollar patent-infringement suit and the declining sales for the company's powerful microprocessor chip.
A. including among them the threat from a rival's multi-billion dollar patent-infringement suit and the declining sales for
B. which includes the threat of a rival's multi-billion dollar patent-infringement suit and declining sales of
C. included among these the threat from a rival's multi-billion dollar patent-infringement suit as well as a decline in sales for
D. among them the threat of a rival's multi-billion dollar patent-infringement suit and the decline in sales of
E. among these the threat from a rival's multi-billion dollar patent-infringement suit as well as the decline in sales for
OA is D .
My question : I could clearly get down to A and D . However, i chose A over D because i thought modifier "among them the threat of a rival's multi-billion dollar patent-infringement suit and the decline in sales of " this way is incorrect. So is not the case as is apparent from the right modifier.
Could an expert help to explain what type of modifier it is, so i could use the same in other construct.
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For one thing, 'including' and 'among them' are redundant. So, A would have been better as:
including the threat from a rival's multi-billion dollar patent-infringement suit and the declining sales for
Or
Among them the threat from a rival's multi-billion dollar patent-infringement suit and the declining sales for
Also, C has parallel structures in:
1. the threat from X
2. decline in Y
including the threat from a rival's multi-billion dollar patent-infringement suit and the declining sales for
Or
Among them the threat from a rival's multi-billion dollar patent-infringement suit and the declining sales for
Also, C has parallel structures in:
1. the threat from X
2. decline in Y
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thanks Ashish. Could you explain what kind of modifier it is :
"among them the threat of a rival's multi-billion dollar patent-infringement suit and the decline in sales of "
"among them the threat of a rival's multi-billion dollar patent-infringement suit and the decline in sales of "
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My 2 cents :
"sales of "is idiomatic than "sales for"
including among is redundant as in A.
"sales of "is idiomatic than "sales for"
including among is redundant as in A.