Don't fool yourself. Putting both having turned 65 this year at the end of the sentence, after Neil Diamond and Dustin Hoffman, is a pretty solid deal breaker.800_or_bust wrote:The official GMAC prep exam questions are definitely tighter than most of the questions from non-GMAC sources. I went back and took a second look at that latest 800score exam. Here was question #5 (a medium difficulty SC question I had missed):
Bruce Springsteen and Meryl Streep are eligible for retirement benefits now, joining the ranks of other celebrities like Neil Diamond and Dustin Hoffman, both having turned 65 this year.
(A) joining the ranks of other celebrities like Neil Diamond and Dustin Hoffman, both having turned 65 this year.
(B) both having turned 65 this year, and join the ranks of other celebrities such as Neil Diamond and Dustin Hoffman.
(C) both turned 65 this year, joining the ranks of other celebrities like Neil Diamond and Dustin Hoffman.
(D) becoming 65 this year, joining the ranks of other celebrities such as Neil Diamond and Dustin Hoffman.
(E) and, because they have turned 65, they will have joined the ranks of other celebrities like Neil Diamond and Dustin Hoffman.
The credited answer is (B). I selected (A). My problem with (B) is the modifier appears to be misplaced - it looks like its modifying retirement benefits instead of the subject, and also the use of the conjunction "and" seems weird here. I would think a participial phrase would be more appropriate. (A) results in a weird sentence - with the "both having turned 65" modifying Neil Diamond and Dustin Hoffman. Grammatically, however, it seems rock solid except for the use of "like" instead of "such as." I guess I should have just keyed in on that minor detail.
Meanwhile, meaning dictates that retirement benefits is not both who turned 65 this year. Don't be too pseudo rule driven.
On the other hand, using like instead of such as seems basically ok to me. We are talking about people who are indeed like Neil Diamond and Dustin Hoffman.
All that having been said, official verbal questions definitely do tend to be tighter than test prep company verbal questions.