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Can you Spot the Meaning Error? - Part 3
Welcome to the final installment in a series of three articles about meaning and sentence structure in sentence correction. Our first one tested meaning and also covered issues related to having to break the sentence into chunks. In the second, we talked about how to use that chunk idea to strip the sentence down to the core structure vs. the modifiers.
Today, Ive got a third GMATPrep problem for you following some of these same themes (Im not going to tell you which ones till after youve tried the problem!).
* Todays technology allows manufacturers to make small cars more fuel-efficient now than at any time in their production history.(A) small cars more fuel-efficient now than at any time in their
(B) small cars that are more fuel-efficient than they were at any time in their
(C) small cars that are more fuel-efficient than those at any other time in
(D) more fuel-efficient small cars than those at any other time in their
(E) more fuel-efficient small cars now than at any time in
The first glance doesnt indicate a lot this time. The answers change from small cars to more (fuel-efficient small cars), which isnt much of a clue. Go ahead and read the original sentence.
What did you think? When I first read it, I shrugged and thought, That sounds okay. If you cant come up with something to tackle from the first glance or the first read-through, then compare answers (A) and (B), looking for differences.
Hmm. I seedo we need to say that are more fuel-efficient? Maybe. Answer (C) uses that same structure. Oh, hey, answer (C) tosses in the word other! I know what theyre doing!
If youve seen the word other tested within a comparison before, you may know, too. If not, get ready to make a note. Take a look at these two sentences:
Auna is taller than any woman in her class.Auna is taller than any other woman in her class.
What's the difference? Are both acceptable or only one?
When youre making a comparison in which one part of the comparison falls into the same group as the rest, you have to find a way to distinguish that one part.
In this case, Auna is a part of the class. Its impossible, then, for her to be taller than any woman in her class, because she herself is one of those women! She has to be taller than any other woman in her class, not including herself.
By the same token, todays small cars cant be more fuel-efficient than at any time in their history, because that history includes right now. They have to be more fuel-efficient now than at any other time.
Answers (A), (B) and (E) are all wrong for this reason, but this meaning error isnt necessarily immediately apparent just from reading the original sentence. The definitive clue is the addition of the word other in answers (C) and (D).
Now that youre down to two, compare them:
(C) small cars that are more fuel-efficient than those at any other time in(D) more fuel-efficient small cars than those at any other time in their
Now, be incredibly careful. There are two differences: small cars that are move fuel-efficient vs. more fuel-efficient small cars and in vs. in their.
Some people will use concision at this point. Be very wary about using concision. First of all, although answer (D) is a little more concise at the beginning, answer (C) is more concise at the end, so how can you decide based on concision?
Second of all, concision is usually a mask for some other issue, typically meaning or modifiers. Dig deeper. Take a look at the full sentence; here is it with (C) inserted into the underline.
Todays technology allows manufacturers to make small cars that are more fuel-efficient than those at any other time in production history.
And (D):
Todays technology allows manufacturers to make more fuel-efficient small cars than those at any other time in their production history.
When modifiers move around, check the meaning.
The first answer says that todays small cars are more fuel-efficient.
The second answer says that the cars are more fuel-efficient? Or that there are more of these types of cars? Im not actually sure.
Hmm. Ambiguity is bad.
Also, whose production history are we talking about? Answer (C) just says in production history, but (D) tosses in the pronoun their. Does their refer to cars? The manufacturers? This choice is unclear; eliminate it.
The correct answer is (C).
Key Takeaways: Examine Meaning when Modifiers Move
(1) Only some of the answers included the modifier other. When a modifier appears or disappears, think about the meaning of the sentence. In particular, when you see the word other included in a comparison, examine that comparison. If the X portion is itself a part of the Y group, then you need to add the word other to make clear that X is not being compared to itself. This car is faster than any other car.
(2) When modifiers move around in a sentence, think about meaning. The placement of modifiers absolutely affects what is being modified, so moving something around may cause the sentence to be illogical or ambiguous.
(3) Ambiguity can be difficult to spot when you already know the intended meaning of the sentence; since you already know what the sentence is trying to say, youre likely to read right over the ambiguity. Actively look for ambiguity (or lack of logic) when you see modifiers moving around.
* GMATPrep questions courtesy of the Graduate Management Admissions Council. Usage of this question does not imply endorsement by GMAC.
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