Onell wrote:GMATGuruNY wrote:oO7Oo wrote:Hello, in the following question
I know why (A) (C) (D) are wrong, but I don't kown why (B) is wrong.
As I understand it, "scholars base it on ..." is right?
Thank you very much.
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Based on accounts of various ancient writers, scholars have painted a
sketchy picture of the activities of an all-female cult that, perhaps
as early as the sixth century B.C., worshipped a goddess known in
Latin as Bona Dea, "the good goddess."
(A) Based on accounts of various ancient writers
(B) Basing it on various ancient writers' accounts
(C) With accounts of various ancient writers used for a basis
(D) By the accounts of various ancient writers they used
(E) Using accounts of various ancient writers
E is better than B because in B the pronoun
it has no antecedent. In B,
it refers to
picture, but the pronoun (it) comes before the noun (picture). Generally, a pronoun should come
after the noun that is being replaced.
Hi ,
In sentence below a pronoun HIS comes before a noun... however its correct...So could you please tell the difference between the construction in option B and a sentence below.... Am I missing sth?
His studies of ice-polished rocks in his Alpine homeland, far outside the range of present-day glaciers, led Louis Agassiz in 1837 to propose the concept of an age in which great ice sheets had existed in what are now temperate areas
(A) in which great ice sheets had existed in what are now temperate areas
(B) in which great ice sheets existed in what are now temperate areas
(C) when great ice sheets existed where there were areas now temperate
(D) when great ice sheets had existed in current temperate areas
(E) when great ice sheets existed in areas now that are temperate
Salman Ghaffar wrote:Onell, in your example
"His studies of ice-polished rocks in his Alpine homeland, far outside the range of present-day glaciers, led Louis Agassiz in 1837 to propose the concept of an age in which great ice sheets had existed in what are now temperate areas"
interchange the pronoun and the subject's name. The construction would become:
"Louis Agassiz's studies of ice-polished rocks in his Alpine homeland, far outside the range of present-day glaciers, led him in 1837 to propose the concept of an age in which great ice sheets had existed in what are now temperate areas" - which is grammatically correct.
For the original question in this thread, as per the official GMAT guide explanation, option B is Choice B is awkward and imprecise in that the referent for the pronoun it is not immediately clear. In other words, E is a clearer option, and thus better.
Careful! The pronoun and the noun cannot be switched as you are suggesting. An object pronoun (such as
him) cannot be used to refer to a possessive construction (such as
Louis Agassiz'), which is functioning not as a noun but as an adjective.
There are several reasons that answer choice B above (
Basing it on accounts...) is not the correct answer:
-- There is another answer choice that avoids the ambiguity presented by the pronoun
it.
-- The introductory modifying phrase (
Basing it...) has not just one unknown but two: who or what was
basing and which noun is being replaced by the pronoun
it. The two unknowns make the modifying phrase harder to follow.
-- The pronoun
it is an object pronoun; the pronoun
his is a possessive pronoun, which, as an adjective, is less crucial to the meaning of the sentence.
The first reason listed is the most important:
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