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The returns indicated on her list

by bpgen » Wed Mar 10, 2010 4:26 am
The returns indicated on her list do not match those on Emilios.
(A) indicated on her list do not match those on Emilios.
(B) on her list do not match those on Emilio's.
(C) indicated on her list do not match those on Emilio's.
(D) indicated on her list do not match those on Emilios'.
(E) indicated on her list do not correspond to those on Emilio's.

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by rohan_vus » Wed Mar 10, 2010 5:50 am
bpgen wrote:The returns indicated on her list do not match those on Emilios.
(A) indicated on her list do not match those on Emilios.
(B) on her list do not match those on Emilio's.
(C) indicated on her list do not match those on Emilio's.
(D) indicated on her list do not match those on Emilios'.

(E) indicated on her list do not correspond to those on Emilio's.

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Why not 'D' for that matter . D and C are same.

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by Ashita Agarwal » Wed Mar 10, 2010 6:09 am
bpgen wrote:
The returns indicated on her list do not match those on Emilios.
(A) indicated on her list do not match those on Emilios.
(B) on her list do not match those on Emilio's.
(C) indicated on her list do not match those on Emilio's.
(D) indicated on her list do not match those on Emilios'.
(E) indicated on her list do not correspond to those on Emilio's.

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Why not 'D' for that matter . D and C are same.

The answer has to be C.

There is one small difference between C and D. In C the last word reads " Emilio's ", whereas in D it reads " Emilios' ". Unless the person's name is Emilios C would be the correct choice.

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by bpgen » Wed Mar 10, 2010 6:14 am
Brilliant Ashita Agarwal!!! You really nailed down!!
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by Ashita Agarwal » Wed Mar 10, 2010 6:17 am
thanks!

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by beat_gmat_09 » Wed Mar 10, 2010 6:19 am
bpgen wrote:The returns indicated on her list do not match those on Emilios.
(A) indicated on her list do not match those on Emilios.
(B) on her list do not match those on Emilio's.
(C) indicated on her list do not match those on Emilio's.
(D) indicated on her list do not match those on Emilios'.
(E) indicated on her list do not correspond to those on Emilio's.

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What's wrong with B ?

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by Ashita Agarwal » Wed Mar 10, 2010 6:53 am
I think B is not the best choice because it deletes the word "indicated".

The returns mentioned in the sentence were indicated on her and Emilio's lists. These returns were not on their lists.

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by delhiboy1979 » Wed Mar 10, 2010 7:10 am
Yes, I dont see anything wrong with B. Isnt 'indicated' redundant. Also, the name could be Emilios.

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by girish3131 » Thu Mar 11, 2010 2:40 am
Ashita Agarwal wrote:I think B is not the best choice because it deletes the word "indicated".

The returns mentioned in the sentence were indicated on her and Emilio's lists. These returns were not on their lists.

good concept...

Thanks!