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The correct answer is C
it carries the right parallelism
with (noun) and with (noun)
B is tempting
by (noun) and by (adverb "ly" ) verb
is not really parallel
it carries the right parallelism
with (noun) and with (noun)
B is tempting
by (noun) and by (adverb "ly" ) verb
is not really parallel
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Calista, I will go for E. Because, the first phrase "In addition to her work" is not matching with the subject - Leakey. So D and E remain. But again D is having some awkward phrases so cancel it out and E remains. IMO E. Calista, what's the OA? I am little bit confused as well. Please post the OA ...
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Amitava
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i think it should be D, because "in addition to" is a modifying phrase that modify "her work" and to make the 2nd sentecne pararllel to the 1st- it has to mention "her work" in the 2nd sentence ?
please post the answer, and let me know if im correct/wrong.
please post the answer, and let me know if im correct/wrong.
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THe answer should be C because of the "documentation of" is more grammatically correct. D and E are obviously wrong because nonparallel and possessive poison. B is wrong because of "contributed by" and A "documenting of" is wrong.
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I dont see how answer d is correct and not causing a parallelism issue! Doesnt choice D cause a modifier issue also!?
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