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GMAT Prep SC Question

by jrbrown2 » Thu Jul 19, 2007 11:31 am
Before scientists learned how to make a synthetic growth hormone, removing it painstakingly in small amounts from the pituitary glands of human cadavers.

A) scientists learned how to make a synthetic growth hormone, removing it painstakingly
B) scientists had learned about making a synthetic growth hormone, they had to remove it painstakingly
C) scientists learned how to synthesize the growth hormone, it had to be painstakingly removed
D) learning how to make a synthetic growth hormone, scientists had to remove it painstakingly
E) learning how to synthesize the growth hormone, it had to be painstakingly removed.

It seems to me that both C and D are correct. Can someone explain why one is more correct than the other?

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by givemeanid » Thu Jul 19, 2007 11:44 am
C talks about 'to synthesize the growth hormone'. That fragment does not have the same meaning as 'to make a synthetic growth hormone'.
The two phrases talk about two different things. D is correct.
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by drhomler » Thu Jul 19, 2007 1:08 pm
What is the OA to this one?
I would think the answer is C
In D seperating remove and painstakingly seems to be awkward construction of the sentence it makes remove the modifier of painstakingly when it shouls be the other way around. Although I do see the point that how to make a sythentic and sythesizing are two different things in terms of word ocnstruction but in essence they do mean the same thing.

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Re: GMAT Prep SC Question

by jayhawk2001 » Thu Jul 19, 2007 7:38 pm
I'll go with C on this one as well.

D is a bit ambiguous in saying that the scientists had to remove it from
human cadavers - I don't think this is implied in the original sentence.

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by jay2007 » Thu Jul 19, 2007 9:22 pm
I would go with D. I agree with what givemanaid said.

what is the OA?

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by jrbrown2 » Fri Jul 20, 2007 9:32 am
OA is C

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by apk.vis » Mon Aug 06, 2007 12:34 am
It is past perfect tense, we have two verbs... so one needs to be in simple past and other in past perfect...(Had + Pp of verb)... So c is correct.

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by veekay » Fri Aug 17, 2007 9:40 am
apk.vis wrote:It is past perfect tense, we have two verbs... so one needs to be in simple past and other in past perfect...(Had + Pp of verb)... So c is correct.
I fully agree with you. My thinking was exactly on those lines.....

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by mankey » Sat Mar 10, 2012 2:30 am
Request some expert to please explain this one.

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by mankey » Sat Mar 10, 2012 9:26 am
Confusion between C & D.

Why is "it" in C correct?

Kindly explain.

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by mankey » Sun Mar 11, 2012 7:39 pm
Confusion between C & D.

Why is "it" in C correct?

Kindly explain.

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by GMATGuruNY » Sun Mar 11, 2012 8:29 pm
jrbrown2 wrote:Before scientists learned how to make a synthetic growth hormone, removing it painstakingly in small amounts from the pituitary glands of human cadavers.

A) scientists learned how to make a synthetic growth hormone, removing it painstakingly
B) scientists had learned about making a synthetic growth hormone, they had to remove it painstakingly
C) scientists learned how to synthesize the growth hormone, it had to be painstakingly removed
D) learning how to make a synthetic growth hormone, scientists had to remove it painstakingly
E) learning how to synthesize the growth hormone, it had to be painstakingly removed.

It seems to me that both C and D are correct. Can someone explain why one is more correct than the other?
In D, the antecedent of it is a synthetic growth hormone. Since synthetic means ARTIFICIAL, D does not convey the intended meaning. How could scientists remove an ARTIFICIAL hormone from HUMAN cadavers? Eliminate D.

In C, the antecedent of it is the growth hormone. The meaning here makes sense: it was THE GROWTH HORMONE that had to be painstakingly removed from human cadavers -- until the scientists learned how to SYNTHESIZE it.

The correct answer is C.
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