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Rental Market

by karthikpandian19 » Sun Jan 08, 2012 2:08 am
Lenders and building managers in the southwestern section of the city report that because of the rental market in the area being renewed, as well as the willingness of the banks to lend money being increased, apartment buildings are being rehabilitated at a pace unseen for a decade.

a. of the rental market in the area being renewed, as well as the willingness of the banks to lend money being increased

b. of the renewed rental market in the area,as well as the willingness of the banks to lend money increasing

c. of the renewed rental market in the area, and the increased willingness of the banks to lend money

d. the rental market in the area renewed and the willingness of the banks to lend money increased, therefore

e. the rental market in the area was being renewed and the banks were increasingly willing to lend money, so
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by sam2304 » Sun Jan 08, 2012 2:56 am
A - being is wrong - seems to be a passive construction owise this choice seems fine.
B - money increasing - wrong
D - the rental market in the area renewed - improper structure, verb seems missing
E - rental market in the area was being renewed and the banks were increasingly willing - Lacks parallelism

IMO C.
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by ArunangsuSahu » Sun Jan 08, 2012 10:40 am
(C) renewed rental market....AND ..increased willingness of...Clear Concise and parallel

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by karthikpandian19 » Sun Jan 08, 2012 5:28 pm
OA is C

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