I think that this was submitted a few times by accident. I'll respond to the first essay.

Hello Rashm, My comments on your first essay also apply to this response. Writing: You should feel free to use normal quotation marks if you quote directly from the prompt. Don't use casual language ("say" in your first paragraph) in the response, because it distracts the reader from your ...

Hello abmanon, I hope that these comments help as you prepare. Writing: There are a few long sentences that should be written as shorter and grammatically correct sentences (including the first sentence of your response). There are a few confusing phrases ("well sound" in the second body p...

Hello letsbeatgmat21, I hope that these comments help as you prepare. Writing: Make sure that you say "the author" instead of only "author" when you're writing. Some of your sentences are a little too long and complicated, so try to write shorter sentences when possible. Structur...

I think that you accidentally posted this twice, so I'll comment on the other essay.

Hello msauers, Great job on improving your essay length! Writing: I didn't notice any significant writing errors. Structure: I saw in your post that you barely had time to finish reviewing before you submitted your material. You've got plenty of strong content, so I think it would be fine to write o...

Hello Architj, After your last response, I recommended being careful about writing mistakes and cutting back on long sentences. Writing: There are still errors with spacing and punctuation, particularly quotations. This section the author claims that"therefore should be written as: the author c...