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Ron: I got confused about the basics on this sentence! What are parts pf speech used in this sentence, verb and subjects for two parts of the sentence?? Also, is it right to say ''People came here at the same time as police DID''?? If yes, choice A is wrong because it does not have verb(did), am i ...

by mohish

Wed Mar 30, 2011 10:44 pm
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: Confused about an elimination on pronoun usage
Replies: 16
Views: 4774

notice that in the original sentence, the author is talking about trends - rising inventories and increases in sales. Hi!! Net search landed me to this response. Could you please explain this. To me, this choice incorrectly compares participle (rising inventories) and gerund (increases in sales). I...

by mohish

Fri Mar 25, 2011 2:49 am
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: Rising inventories
Replies: 19
Views: 18103

Confusing OA..

OG 12, q 12: Rising inventories, when unaccompanied correspondingly by increases in sales, can lead to production cutbacks that would hamper economic growth. (A) when unaccompanied correspondingly by increases in sales, can lead (B) when not accompanied by corresponding increases in sales, possibly ...

by mohish

Fri Mar 25, 2011 2:44 am
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: Confusing OA..
Replies: 3
Views: 1624

Hilarious...where is "India" mentioned in the sentence:)

by mohish

Thu Mar 24, 2011 9:35 am
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: A discussion of our nation's foreign policy
Replies: 4
Views: 1584

What's the source of this question? OG Verbal Review 2nd edition. The explanation in OG is wrong which is one aspect. Actually I have specifically seen this aspect of gerunds and participles in multiple questions; hence, wanted to know if someone is more aware of what 'exactly' on GMAT Land is the ...

by mohish

Thu Mar 24, 2011 9:26 am
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: Wrong explanation in OG...
Replies: 6
Views: 2103

any ~ing word that works as a noun is a gerund. eg- smiling makes you look younger. In this question excelling is used as an adjective for sports hence is a participle. Thanks for your reply. However, I am positive that 'excelling' is used as a 'gerund' here. You mention that 'smiling' is a gerund ...

by mohish

Wed Mar 23, 2011 8:33 pm
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: Wrong explanation in OG...
Replies: 6
Views: 2103

Wrong explanation in OG...

If Dr. Wade was right, any apparent connection of the eating of highly processed foods and excelling at sports is purely coincidental. A) If Dr. Wade was right, any apparent connection of the eating of B) Should Dr. Wade be right, any apparent connection of eating C) IF Dr. Wade is right, any conne...

by mohish

Wed Mar 23, 2011 9:50 am
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: Wrong explanation in OG...
Replies: 6
Views: 2103

Thanks Ron. That clears things up.

by mohish

Thu Dec 23, 2010 10:21 pm
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: GOLD
Replies: 22
Views: 11912

expanding on what stuart said: Very quick question if you know what to look for: "because of erosion..." needs to be followed with ".. that put gold...". "since erosion..." needs to be followed with "put gold...". yes. i should add that we can also say "...

by mohish

Sat Dec 18, 2010 6:46 am
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: GOLD
Replies: 22
Views: 11912

lunarpower wrote:
"which" can do that, but it is also well documented that "which" can modify the previous noun + prepositional phrase.
Hi Ron!! Can you kindly quote any example from OG (current or past or supplement) that does this.

Thanks in anticipation.

by mohish

Tue Nov 30, 2010 8:03 am
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: verb+ed and verb+ing
Replies: 8
Views: 4238

Not sure if I get your question, but let me try. Firstly, the phrase each with its… modifies species . Lets take an example to make it more clear: Indian cricket team has eleven players, each with his own strengths and weakness . Here, each with own strengths and weakness modifies (tell us somethi...

by mohish

Thu Nov 11, 2010 10:22 am
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: Deserts
Replies: 3
Views: 2612

niksworth wrote: Bottomline:
While the OA should never be questioned, the OE often sucks in OG. Take note and move on. Don't fret too much on it.
Well, many many OEs just say: "awkward and wordy", which is the explanation I would put in the sucks category.

But this one is a step further:).

by mohish

Thu Nov 11, 2010 6:47 am
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: Wrong explanation in OG...
Replies: 12
Views: 4379

For some reason entirely unknown to me, I have not been able to express my concern:)

I never said that the answer to this question is wrong. All I am saying is that OE for option C is wrong. Period.

by mohish

Thu Nov 11, 2010 2:01 am
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: Wrong explanation in OG...
Replies: 12
Views: 4379

'at the decreasing of...' is complex gerund phrase. 'improving..' is simple gerund phrase. Note that simple gerund phrases is not always parallel to complex gerund phrase. I would agree with that, but as I said, OE states: Using 'the' before 'decreasing' creates a gerund, which is not parallel to t...

by mohish

Thu Nov 11, 2010 12:27 am
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: Wrong explanation in OG...
Replies: 12
Views: 4379

I sincerely apologize. Will be more careful in my choice of words the next time.

by mohish

Wed Nov 10, 2010 11:35 pm
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: Wrong explanation in OG...
Replies: 12
Views: 4379