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Thank you Katharine for a detailed analysis.
I'll keep in mind the usage of it's and its.
Also. the final statement should've been "for it to maintain a going concern status"
A typo.
Anyway, thank you.
It helped. 
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Sun Jul 12, 2015 1:32 pm- Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
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AWA ESSAYS: Analyze Argument ESSAY QUESTION: The following appeared in a corporate memorandum of a beverage manufacturer: “Our promotional price reductions on energy drinks have been highly successful, as we have seen a dramatic increase in unit sales. Further, surveys of our consumers indicate th...
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Sat Jul 11, 2015 5:12 pm- Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
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