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Here is a response to the same question. I couldn't think of many points. Could you suggest some? And please give feedback for this essay. The argument claims that DKLA is expected to fail in the casual women's business apparel market, as a result of saturating demand. This claim is based on the pre...
- by avnikajain
Thu Jul 09, 2015 4:41 am- Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
- Topic: Exam in 3 days please can I have some feedback
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Thanks for the rating. I have worked on the length a bit and I have already seen the videos. :) ARGUMENT ’The producers of the forthcoming movie 3003 will be most likely to maximize their profits if they are willing to pay Robin Good several million dollars to star in it - even though that amount ...
- by avnikajain
Tue Jul 07, 2015 8:29 am- Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
- Topic: Please rate this essay: Train & Gain
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PROMPT: The following advice was given to a politician by his political consultant: "It is true that 200 apartment renters protested in the rain about the elimination of rent control regulation. However, there are 20,000 renters in the entire city. 19,800 of them stayed home and did not protest...
- by avnikajain
Mon Jul 06, 2015 6:33 am- Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
- Topic: AWA Essay Attempt #2. Please read, rate, and comment
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Thanks for the feedback! I have tried to improve the concluding paragraph, but I am not able to write too much in the 30-minute time frame. So, length is still a problem, do you have some suggestions on how write longer paragraphs? ESSAY QUESTION: The following appeared in a strategy memorandum of ...
- by avnikajain
Mon Jul 06, 2015 1:21 am- Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
- Topic: Please rate this essay: Train & Gain
- Replies: 5
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Please rate this essay: Police Draco
ESSAY QUESTION: The following appeared as part of a campaign statement for Velazquez, who is seeking election as alderman in the town of Barchester: “Under Police Commissioner Draco, the city of Spartanburg began jailing people for committing petty crimes such as littering, shoplifting, and sprayi...
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Mon Jun 22, 2015 4:08 am- Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
- Topic: Please rate this essay: Police Draco
- Replies: 1
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Please rate this essay: Train & Gain
ESSAY QUESTION: The following appeared in a print advertisement for a dietary supplement: “According to a recent study, professional bodybuilders who used Train & Gain, a new protein supplement, over the course of three months experienced an increase in measured strength of up to 20%. Since Tr...
- by avnikajain
Mon Jun 22, 2015 3:30 am- Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
- Topic: Please rate this essay: Train & Gain
- Replies: 5
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Please rate this essay: Federville Frams
The following appeared as part of an article reviewing summer camps for children. Parents, if you need a summer camp for your children look no further than Federville Farms. In a recent survey, Federville Farms ranked first in both overall camper satisfaction and in food quality, and second in the v...
- by avnikajain
Thu Jun 18, 2015 8:19 am- Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
- Topic: Please rate this essay: Federville Frams
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The following appeared as part of an article reviewing summer camps for children. Parents, if you need a summer camp for your children look no further than Federville Farms. In a recent survey, Federville Farms ranked first in both overall camper satisfaction and in food quality, and second in the v...
- by avnikajain
Thu Jun 18, 2015 8:07 am- Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
- Topic: Federville Farms for children
- Replies: 7
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