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Please rate my essay
"Americans spend far too much of their time buying and consuming non-essential goods. Studies show that, on average Americans spend over a quarter of their leisure time shopping. As such, it is no secret why America is losing its competitive edge relative to other countries. Instead of spendin...
- by abmanon
Wed Dec 16, 2015 5:52 pm- Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
- Topic: Please rate my essay
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I took my GMAT, got a 4.5 in my essay. I may repeat the GMAT but I'm happy with the essay result. I'll keep practicing though,Katharine@GMATPrepNow wrote:You're welcome. Please let me know if you have other responses that need review, or if you have questions before the exam.
- by abmanon
Thu Jul 23, 2015 1:34 pm- Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
- Topic: Please rate my essay - not an english speaker
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- by abmanon
Fri Jul 17, 2015 12:11 pm- Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
- Topic: Please rate my essay - not an english speaker
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Please rate my essay - not an english speaker
Hey! thank you in asvance for helping me, this is my second try today. I think I did bad :S The writer on the article claims that people are not as concerned as before in regulating their intake of red meat and fatty cheese because an organic store sells now a selection of cheese, he also cites as e...
- by abmanon
Wed Jul 15, 2015 5:30 pm- Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
- Topic: Please rate my essay - not an english speaker
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Please rate my AWA - Not a Native Speaker
Hello, Can someone rate my essay' Is not perfect but is hard for me to pull off a great essay in just 30 minutes.. The following appeared as part of a column in a popular entertainment magazine The producers of the forthcoming movie 3003 will be most likely to maximize their profits if they are will...
- by abmanon
Wed Jul 15, 2015 2:31 pm- Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
- Topic: Please rate my AWA - Not a Native Speaker
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Hello abmanon, This was a good start on your AWA for the GMAT, but there's still work to do. If you have any specific questions, please let me know. Writing: You have a few long sentences that could be shortened so they're more clear, such as "On the other hand, in addition to bad safety measu...
- by abmanon
Tue Apr 14, 2015 8:20 am- Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
- Topic: Please rate my AWA - Not a Native Speaker
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Please rate my AWA - Not a Native Speaker
Can you please rate my essay? this is hard for me, I hope I did a good job. The following appeared in the editorial section of a monthly business news magazine: "Most companies would agree that as the risk of physical injury occurring on the job increases, the wages paid to employees should als...
- by abmanon
Sun Apr 12, 2015 4:26 pm- Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
- Topic: Please rate my AWA - Not a Native Speaker
- Replies: 3
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