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Thanks Katherine. Now that you mention it, I do notice an excessive use of etc. Will try and consciously tone it down in my last few practice essays. Thanks again for all your help.
Vijay
- by vijay2990
Mon May 18, 2015 6:39 am- Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
- Topic: Please evaluate my essay - Exam Pack 1 - Test 2
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Thank you Katherine. I did notice that I barely had time to review my essay and that is an area I'm trying to improve. A quick question. When you say do not use abbreviations, which ones are you referring to? Thanks for the other essay as well. I had written that one a week before this essay and per...
- by vijay2990
Sat May 16, 2015 11:57 pm- Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
- Topic: Please evaluate my essay - Exam Pack 1 - Test 2
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Please evaluate my essay - Exam Pack 1 - Test 1
Hi, Could you please evaluate my essay. I have scheduled my GMAT exam for the 25th of May (Monday). I've written about 5 essays till now but I am not able to assess my progress and areas for improvement. ________________________________________________________________________________________________...
- by vijay2990
Sat May 16, 2015 8:04 pm- Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
- Topic: Please evaluate my essay - Exam Pack 1 - Test 1
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Please evaluate my essay - Exam Pack 1 - Test 2
Hi, Could you please evaluate my essay. I have scheduled my GMAT exam for the 25th of May (Monday). I've written about 5 essays till now but I am not able to assess my progress and areas for improvement. I made a few spelling errors but have retained it in the essay posted so that you can see them a...
- by vijay2990
Sat May 16, 2015 8:02 pm- Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
- Topic: Please evaluate my essay - Exam Pack 1 - Test 2
- Replies: 5
- Views: 2191