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The answer must be (E). "such as" in (A) would be appropriate if it were linking noun phrases, but here it's modifying a clause and introducing a clause. (B) is unnecessarily wordy. In (C) and (D), the underlined portion is imposing conditions or limitations on when television is superfici...

by KarenVH

Wed Mar 02, 2016 12:16 pm
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: Although it claims to
Replies: 1
Views: 1105

The first thing to notice is that this is a parallelism question. They throw in the word "tilting", which could mislead you into thinking that "changing...varying" would be parallel, but another phrase in the sequence -- "fluctuations and other deformations" -- makes it...

by KarenVH

Mon Feb 22, 2016 10:19 am
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: Earthquake
Replies: 5
Views: 1916

The OA must be (D). That is the one answer that is clear, unambiguous, and more or less correct grammatically - though I see a flaw even in (D). (A) uses "instead of," which suggests that the surface area of the flask is being offered as a replacement for the idea of a series of irregular ...

by KarenVH

Sat Feb 20, 2016 12:23 pm
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: In order to ensure that chemical reaction in the lab behave
Replies: 2
Views: 1407

Is A also incorrect because at cleaning and preserving conveys the meaning as if scientists and historians themselves are doing cleaning and preserving ? I don't quite see that reading -- perhaps I don't understand what you're getting at -- but "in their attempt at cleaning and preserving"...

by KarenVH

Fri Feb 19, 2016 2:16 pm
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: Using technology as new as space-age fabrics
Replies: 16
Views: 6916

In the OA, "falling" is a present participle. It would help if you would clarify how it would help *you* to know whether it's a gerund or a participle or something else. For instance, is there a particular rule that you're trying to apply here, such that getting this -ing form correctly la...

by KarenVH

Thu Feb 18, 2016 10:47 am
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: The results of the company's cost-cutting measures are
Replies: 14
Views: 7390

This is question #60 from the Official Guide Verbal Review 2016. I agree that it's sloppily worded, though -- unusually so for official material. My complaint about it is that it has a new *style* skimming along the top of the atmosphere. There are other SC types for which that sort of usage would b...

by KarenVH

Tue Feb 16, 2016 11:53 am
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: Proponents
Replies: 2
Views: 1412

The noun that is the subject of the sentence is "species." The word "family" is contained in a modifier, so it isn't the subject. Imagine that the modifier were something different -- let's say "The 32 species of dolphins that come from Madagascar are closely related..."...

by KarenVH

Sun Sep 27, 2015 8:28 pm
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: OG15, SC Q67
Replies: 2
Views: 1488

(B) has a flaw in parallelism: "neutrinos...are elementary particles produced in nuclear reactions and which..." It says "and which," so this phrase must be parallel to something else, but what is the "which" supposed to be parallel to? Also important: (B) buries the po...

by KarenVH

Tue Sep 01, 2015 2:05 pm
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: As a result of a supernova explosion, every human being on
Replies: 5
Views: 4984

The fact that Minneapolis is in Zone 4 doesn't necessarily mean that there are cities with a colder average temperature, because we haven't been told that Zones 1, 2 or 3 actually have any cities in them. They might be just rural areas with small towns, or pure wilderness. But the fact that the zone...

by KarenVH

Fri Aug 28, 2015 2:57 pm
Forum: Critical Reasoning
Topic: Hardiness Zones - Must Be True Question
Replies: 5
Views: 1793

This one is pretty straightforward -- "gardens" is plural so Hanging Gardens of Babylon is plural. If this were the title of a book, it would be singular as it would be the title of a single work, but as it is, it's referring to plural gardens, so it's still plural. Karen v.H. GMAT Verbal ...

by KarenVH

Fri Aug 21, 2015 2:14 pm
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: The Hanging Gardens of Babylon
Replies: 6
Views: 3248

The correct form is "I don't know where she lives." The reason is that when a question is embedded as part of a larger sentence (e.g. "I don't know _who he is_," "Do you know _where we should go_?") we don't use the normal question word order (as in "Does she live ...

by KarenVH

Mon Mar 11, 2013 8:56 pm
Forum: English Language Tests
Topic: TOEFL Grammar problem.
Replies: 6
Views: 3738