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Hello magpie16, I understand that we can drop a common word ( to ) while writing a parallel structure. One can have 'to' before each element of parallel structure or can have only one 'to' in a parallel sentence applicable to all elements. However This rule does not apply when we have a correlative ...


IMO: D Original Sentence: A recent study, published by the California Bureau of Employment, found that people who sent in resumes with “ethnic-sounding� names had a much more difficult time getting called back from employers as people who sent in resumes showing similar qualifications but “whi...

by positiveamal

Thu May 30, 2013 5:44 pm
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: SC question
Replies: 1
Views: 1065

Thanks for such a good explanation Mitch. I still have a doubt with option E. I don't see parallelism in infinitives 'to retire' and 'face' . As per my understanding, because of using correlative conjunction 'rather than' one must maintain parallelism in infinitives. Shouldn't it be saying: Doctors ...


Problem with B: The subject of the sentence would be 'The greatest road system' and not 'Incan highway'. 'Over 2,500 miles in length' modifies 'Incan highway' , that is fine. But, 'was extended ....... to Southern Chille' works for the subject 'The greatest road system' and not 'Incan highway' . Tha...

by positiveamal

Sun May 26, 2013 8:50 am
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: Christopher Columbus and a Highway
Replies: 1
Views: 1667

Infant mortality in Industrialized vs less-developed country

An analysis of infant mortality shows that, over the last twenty years, the number of infant deaths in less-developed countries has been dropping at a faster rate than has the number of infant deaths in industrialized countries. As of this year, however, industrialized countries still have considera...


IMO: C.
The subject of sentence is "higher interest rate" with a singular verb KEEPS and a singular Pronout IT and using AS to compare two actions.

by positiveamal

Mon Apr 29, 2013 7:15 pm
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: A higher interest rate is only one of the factors
Replies: 16
Views: 5409

Any more: something additional or further
Example: I don’t want any more champagne.

Anymore: any longer, nowadays
Example: Harry doesn’t come to bar anymore.

Found on net!

by positiveamal

Mon Apr 29, 2013 7:07 pm
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: Anymore Vs Any more
Replies: 5
Views: 1560

Parallelism Marker: "Either X or Y" "Either asking ..... or thanking" would be parallel. (Remove B & D at this point) "Supplicants were asking the goddess Bona Dea’s aid in healing physical and mental ills" is correct. If we chose E: "Supplicants were asking ...

by positiveamal

Sun Apr 14, 2013 10:41 pm
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: OG SC
Replies: 4
Views: 1398