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The following appeared in a corporate memorandum of a beverage manufacturer: “Our promotional price reductions on energy drinks have been highly successful, as we have seen a dramatic increase in unit sales. Further, surveys of our consumers indicate that this promotion was favorably received by t...
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Thu Jun 28, 2012 6:11 am- Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
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The following appeared as part of an article in a magazine on lifestyles. "Two years ago, City L was listed 14th in an annual survey that ranks cities according to the quality of life that can be enjoyed by those living in them. This information will enable people who are moving to the state in...
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Tue Jun 26, 2012 6:37 am- Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
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Could some one please rate my essay and provide feedback on my writings ? The following appeared in the opinion column of a financial magazine. "On average, middle-aged consumers devote 39 percent of their retail expenditure to department store products and services, while for younger consumers...
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Tue Jun 26, 2012 6:34 am- Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
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Could someone please rate my essay. We are living in a highly advanced technological era, we have lot of advantages which our forefathers could not have imagined, but this era also brings with it lot serious concerns threating the existence of our planet. Many people claim that city life is better b...
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Tue Jun 26, 2012 2:18 am- Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
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