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The following appeared as part of an article in a trade publication. “Stronger laws are needed to protect new kinds of home-security systems from being copied and sold by imitators. With such protection, manufacturers will naturally invest in the development of new home-security products and produ...

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Sun Jul 29, 2012 8:37 pm
Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
Topic: Need your suggestions. Please review this essay
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Please grade my analysis of issue essay, thanks

“Corporations and other businesses should try to eliminate the many ranks and salary grades that classify employees according to their experience and expertise. A ‘flat’ organizational structure is more likely to encourage collegiality and cooperation among employees.� The argument states th...

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Wed Apr 25, 2012 6:03 am
Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
Topic: Please grade my analysis of issue essay, thanks
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Hi, Please rate this analysis of argument essay. Thanks.

The following appeared in a memorandum from the business department of the Apogee Company: “When the Apogee Company had all its operations in one location, it was more profitable than it is today. Therefore, the Apogee Company should close down its field offices and conduct all its operations from...

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Thu Oct 06, 2011 12:01 am
Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
Topic: Hi, Please rate this analysis of argument essay. Thanks.
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Hi. Please rate this analysis of issue. Thanks.

“It is unrealistic to expect individual nations to make, independently, the sacrifices necessary to conserve energy. International leadership and worldwide cooperation are essential if we expect to protect the world’s energy resources for future generations.� Discuss the extent to which you ag...

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Wed Oct 05, 2011 1:10 am
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Topic: Hi. Please rate this analysis of issue. Thanks.
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Please rate this analysis of an issue piece. Thanks

"In some countries, television and radio programs are carefully censored for offensive language and behavior. In other countries, there is little or no censorship.� In your view, to what extent should government or any other group be able to censor television or radio programs? Explain, givin...

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Wed Sep 28, 2011 9:12 pm
Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
Topic: Please rate this analysis of an issue piece. Thanks
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"The following appeared as part of an annual report sent to stockholders by Olympic Foods, a processor of frozen foods. “Over time, the costs of processing go down because as organizations learn how to do things better, they become more efficient. In colour film processing, for example, the c...

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Wed Sep 28, 2011 7:42 pm
Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
Topic: Hi, Please rate this analysis of argument essay. Thanks.
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