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## sc7

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leo Senior | Next Rank: 100 Posts
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#### sc7

Sat Jun 09, 2007 12:08 am
Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully
coordinating them with her narratives
, capitalized
on her keen observation and love of the natural
world.

(A) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, care-
fully coordinating them with her narratives
(B) In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating
them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter

(C) In her book illustrations, which she carefully
coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix
Potter
(D) Carefully coordinated with her narratives,
Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations
(E) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully
coordinated them with her narratives and

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Roland2rule Master | Next Rank: 500 Posts
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Wed Nov 22, 2017 11:52 pm
Option A.
This option does not follow the proper arrangement and analysis. And it also lacks proper modifier.

Option B. It is clear that this doesn't flow.This option lacks proper arrangement. It does not follow the right proper sequence.

Option c.
This is the correct option as this option clearly gives a nice construction on her work. Beatrix Potter is the action performer and it is very close to the action stated in the sentence. And it also follows parallelism.

Option D. This option suffers bad arrangement of elements as it conflicts the subject and the object. Thuss, this option is incorrect

Option E.
This does not mean anything reasonable because there was bad grammatical construction.

discreet Senior | Next Rank: 100 Posts
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Sat Jun 09, 2007 11:07 pm
Yes,to keep it simple as Jay has pointed out,

....."capitalized on her keen observation" who?
so,This clause is modifying the Subject "Beatrix Potter"
So,A sentence that uses a logical flow of modifiers and places them in correct order will be the best one.

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Roland2rule Master | Next Rank: 500 Posts
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Wed Nov 22, 2017 11:52 pm
Option A.
This option does not follow the proper arrangement and analysis. And it also lacks proper modifier.

Option B. It is clear that this doesn't flow.This option lacks proper arrangement. It does not follow the right proper sequence.

Option c.
This is the correct option as this option clearly gives a nice construction on her work. Beatrix Potter is the action performer and it is very close to the action stated in the sentence. And it also follows parallelism.

Option D. This option suffers bad arrangement of elements as it conflicts the subject and the object. Thuss, this option is incorrect

Option E.
This does not mean anything reasonable because there was bad grammatical construction.

discreet Senior | Next Rank: 100 Posts
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Sat Jun 09, 2007 11:07 pm
Yes,to keep it simple as Jay has pointed out,

....."capitalized on her keen observation" who?
so,This clause is modifying the Subject "Beatrix Potter"
So,A sentence that uses a logical flow of modifiers and places them in correct order will be the best one.

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