Long term goal on essays

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Long term goal on essays

by mbahopeful888 » Thu Sep 11, 2014 8:17 am
Hi,

My long term goal is to start my own businesses, yes, I actually have two business goals that I would hopefully be able to achieve. These two goals are somewhat related and strive to serve the same group of people, but would be two different business fields. These are truly my passions but is it a bad idea to include both on the essay? or would I be better off sticking to one?

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by Jon@Admissionado » Fri Sep 12, 2014 12:50 am
It is much better to stick to one for the simple reason that two goals makes you seem confused (you'd likely also need double the space). So my suggestion is that you choose the ONE that is more concrete and more developed, and you run with it.
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