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PostTue Jul 15, 2008 8:19 am Reply with quote
You've done a good job on these - both essays are done exactly right. Nice job addressing the assumptions in the Argument essay and using real world examples in the Issue essay.

I'd probably give you a 5, just because of some grammatical errors.

Keep it up!
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