people that move to western states

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people that move to western states

by AnjaliOberoi » Fri Sep 18, 2015 2:30 am
The more people that move to western states, which is an already overburdened ecosystem, the more
pressure on water resources becomes increasingly great
, eventually requiring the diversion of major
rivers and the construction of dams.
"¢ The more people that move to western states, which is an already overburdened ecosystem, the more
pressure on water resources becomes increasingly great
"¢ The more that people move to western states, which is an already overburdened ecosystem, the
greater the pressure is on water resources
"¢ With more people moving to western states, an already overburdened ecosystem, the more pressure
on water resources becomes increasingly great
"¢ The more that people move to western states, an already overburdened ecosystem, the greater the
pressure on water resources becomes
"¢ The more people move to western states, which are already an overburdened ecosystem, the greater
the pressure on water resources becomes

OA E
The correct idiom is the more X, the more Y, but in the correct answer choice, the idiom -> the more X, the greater Y.. Is this usage ok?