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OG 2013 SC Warning that computers in

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OG 2013 SC Warning that computers in

Post Sat Sep 16, 2017 10:41 pm
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    Warning that computers in the United States are not secure, the National Academy of Sciences has urged the nation to revamp computer security procedures, institute new emergency response teams, creating a special nongovernment organization to take charge of computer security planning.

    A. creating a special nongovernment organization to take
    B. creating a special nongovernment organization that takes
    C. creating a special nongovernment organization for taking
    D. and create a special nongovernment for taking
    E. and create a special nongovernment to take

    OA: E

    Someone, please explain the POE. Why is "A" incorrect? Thanks in advance.

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    Post Mon Sep 25, 2017 8:46 am
    This question is testing PARALLELISM.

    Let's break the original sentence down:

    Modifier: (Warning that computers in the United States are not secure,)
    SUBJECT: the National Academy of Sciences
    VERB: has urged the nation to
    1. revamp (computer security procedures),
    2. institute new emergency response teams, (creating a special nongovernment organization to take charge of computer security planning.)
    3. ... and...

    "Revamp" and "institute" in the non-underlined portion form part of a list, but there is no "and" connecting them. This tells us that "create" must be the 3rd list item, and we need "and" to connect the list: X, Y, and Z.

    In the original, "creating..." is a participial phrase modifying the entire clause before it. This makes no sense - creating an organization for computer security planning doesn't give us additional information about anything previous. Eliminate A, B, and C.

    The correct idiom is "create X to do Y" not "create X for doing Y." The correct answer is E.

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