OA A . Please explain what's wrong with B.
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niraj_a wrote:OA A . Please explain what's wrong with B.
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"sales of wines declined in the late 1980's"
Parallels
" They began to grow again after the late 1991"
( Hint from stem...Noun/Pronoun+Increase/decrease of Noun+ prepositional phrase)
secondly,
They began growing again- clause describes "Sales"
Noun modifier must be kept as close as possible to the noun it modifies
so, B has
1. No parallelism
2. Modifier issues
3. growing...was akward to me
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Am not sure if there's any specific rule but it should be 'moderate alcohol consumption' right ?niraj_a wrote:pradeep, i forgot the rule why that is wrong, could you mention it again for me?
thanks!
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