Verb tense - Past perfect

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Verb tense - Past perfect

by karthikpandian19 » Fri May 11, 2012 12:52 am
24. A recent study has found that within the past few years, many doctors had elected early retirement rather than face the threats of lawsuits and the rising costs of malpractice insurance.
(A) had elected early retirement rather than face
(B) had elected early retirement instead of facing
(C) have elected retiring early instead of facing
(D) have elected to retire early rather than facing
(E) have elected to retire early rather than face

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by bubbliiiiiiii » Fri May 11, 2012 2:20 am
karthikpandian19 wrote:24. A recent study has found that within the past few years, many doctors had elected early retirement rather than face the threats of lawsuits and the rising costs of malpractice insurance.
(A) had elected early retirement rather than face
(B) had elected early retirement instead of facing
(C) have elected retiring early instead of facing
(D) have elected to retire early rather than facing
(E) have elected to retire early rather than face
I don't think past perfect tense is required here.

IMO E
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by GmatKiss » Fri May 11, 2012 11:51 pm
IMO: E

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by GMAT Kolaveri » Sat May 12, 2012 1:01 am
karthikpandian19 wrote:24. A recent study has found that within the past few years, many doctors had elected early retirement rather than face the threats of lawsuits and the rising costs of malpractice insurance.
Rather than vs Instead of
Rather than: Used to show preference.
Instead of : Replace

In this question rather than is correct. B and C are out.
X rather than y. here X and Y should be parallel. "Many doctors" requires plural verb "have".
Hence E is correct.

(A) had elected early retirement rather than face
(B) had elected early retirement instead of facing
(C) have elected retiring early instead of facing
(D) have elected to retire early rather than facing
(E) have elected to retire early rather than face
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by karthikpandian19 » Sat May 12, 2012 5:45 pm
Why not "D", as facing is parallel withe the rising ????
bubbliiiiiiii wrote:
karthikpandian19 wrote:24. A recent study has found that within the past few years, many doctors had elected early retirement rather than face the threats of lawsuits and the rising costs of malpractice insurance.
(A) had elected early retirement rather than face
(B) had elected early retirement instead of facing
(C) have elected retiring early instead of facing
(D) have elected to retire early rather than facing
(E) have elected to retire early rather than face
I don't think past perfect tense is required here.

IMO E

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by confuse mind » Sat May 12, 2012 7:26 pm
karthikpandian19 wrote:Why not "D", as facing is parallel withe the rising ????
bubbliiiiiiii wrote:
karthikpandian19 wrote:24. A recent study has found that within the past few years, many doctors had elected early retirement rather than face the threats of lawsuits and the rising costs of malpractice insurance.
(A) had elected early retirement rather than face
(B) had elected early retirement instead of facing
(C) have elected retiring early instead of facing
(D) have elected to retire early rather than facing
(E) have elected to retire early rather than face
I don't think past perfect tense is required here.

IMO E

First - past perfect is not suited here since the sentence is not conveying one past action before the other
Second - in D, facing is not verb, rather noun and thus is parallel to 'threats'
face (verb) is used for both threats(noun) and rising(noun)

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by karthikpandian19 » Sat May 12, 2012 7:53 pm
Still not clear with the explanation:

Can any GMAT experts provide explanation for this : Why not "D", as "facing" is parallel with the "rising" ????

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by GMAT Kolaveri » Sun May 13, 2012 5:47 am
karthikpandian19 wrote:Why not "D", as facing is parallel withe the rising ????
bubbliiiiiiii wrote:
karthikpandian19 wrote:24. A recent study has found that within the past few years, many doctors had elected early retirement rather than face the threats of lawsuits and the rising costs of malpractice insurance.
(A) had elected early retirement rather than face
(B) had elected early retirement instead of facing
(C) have elected retiring early instead of facing
(D) have elected to retire early rather than facing
(E) have elected to retire early rather than face
I don't think past perfect tense is required here.

IMO E
to retire is not parallel with facing
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by Bill@VeritasPrep » Sun May 13, 2012 6:47 am
Rising is an adjective used to modify "costs," so we don't have to worry about it being parallel to "to retire" and "(to) face."
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