Marconi’s conception

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Marconi’s conception

by kamalj » Sun Dec 10, 2017 1:48 am
Marconi's conception of the radio was as a substitute for the telephone, a tool for private conversation; instead, it is precisely the opposite, a tool for communicating with a large, public audience.

A. Marconi's conception of the radio was as a substitute for the telephone, a tool for private conversation; instead, it is
B. Marconi conceived of the radio as a substitute for the telephone, a tool for private conversation, but which is
C. Marconi conceived of the radio as a tool for private conversation that could substitute for the telephone; instead, it has become
D. Marconi conceived of the radio to be a tool for private conversation, a substitute for the telephone, which has become
E. Marconi conceived of the radio to be a substitute for the telephone, a tool for private conversation, other than what it is,

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Please explain why E is wrong?

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by ErikaPrepScholar » Mon Dec 11, 2017 8:14 am
Two key issues with E:

The first issue is "conceived of X to be" is not idiomatic - the correct idiom is "conceived of X as".

The second issue is "other than what it is". Not only is this wordy and awkward, but it also doesn't have quite the right meaning: "other than" seems to imply an exception (e.g. "I will eat anything other than spinach"). We aren't looking for an exception - we want an opposite. "Instead" more clearly matches the intended meaning.
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