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PostPosted: Thu May 15, 2008 5:05 pm    Post subject: Dr. Hegsted argues that just as polio vaccine Reply with quote

Dr. Hegsted argues that just as polio vaccine is given to every person to protect the few who might actually contract polio, mass dietary change is needed to protect the significant number who are susceptible to the life-threatening effects of press eating habits.

(A) just as polio vaccine is given to every person to protect the few who might actually contract polio
(B) like polio vaccine, which is given to every person to protect the few who might contract polio
(C) similar to polio vaccine which is given to every person in order to protect the few who might actually contract polio
(D) while, to protect the few who might actually contract polio, polio vaccine is given to every person
(E) similar to the giving of polio vaccine to every person in order to protect the few who might contract polio actually
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PostPosted: Thu May 15, 2008 7:35 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

IMO E. Here the correct comparision is between two actions (verb) giving of vaccine and chage....
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PostPosted: Sat May 17, 2008 2:08 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

A - correct idiom is Jast as ....so
C - Which is non essential clause so need a comma before it
D - while is used to show contrast not similarities
E - sound awkward 'giving of polio vaccine'

Correct
B - comares similarties between two nouns Polio vaccine and mass dietary chang.

Btw - what is OA
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PostPosted: Sat May 17, 2008 7:44 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

(B) is correct

like polio vaccine, which is given to every person to protect the few who might contract polio, mass dietary change is needed to protect the significant number who are susceptible to the life-threatening effects of press eating habits.

Which correctly refers to PV.

also if we remove the phrase in between, the sentence reads like PV, MDC

PV & MDC are nouns and like is needed.


Agree with s_raizada with explanations
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PostPosted: Sat May 17, 2008 2:25 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

OA is A
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