Each year companies in the United States could save as much as $58 billion annually by preventing illness among employees and gain as much as $200 billion through improving performance of workers if they simply provided offices with cleaner air.
(A) annually by preventing illness among employees and gain as much as $200 billion through improving
performance of workers if they simply provided
(B) annually if they prevented employee illness and gain as much as $200 billion through worker performance improved by simply providing
(C) annually in employee illness prevention and gain as much as $200 billion through worker performance improved by simply providing
(D) in employee illness prevention and gain as much as $200 billion through improving performance of workers if they simply provided
(E) by preventing illness among employees and gain as much as $200 billion through improved worker performance if they simply provided
OE E
Well I can easily eliminate A,B and C for the use of redundant word anually.
Please explain in a bit detail why E and Not D.
Idiom problem or adjective issue?or both?
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Errors in D:akash singhal wrote: Please explain in a bit detail why E and Not D.
Idiom problem or adjective issue?or both?
could save as much as $58 billion in employee illness prevention
Here, the conveyed meaning is that a PARTICULAR COST -- the cost of illness prevention -- could be reduced by $58 billion.
The intended meaning of the original sentence is that TOTAL COSTS could be reduced by $58 billion and that preventing illness is HOW these total costs could be reduced.
Since D does not convey the intended meaning, eliminate D.
through improving performance of workers
Interpretation 1: COMPANIES will be IMPROVING the performance of workers.
Interpretation 2: The PERFORMANCE of workers will be IMPROVING on its own.
Since the intended meaning is not crystal clear, eliminate D.
improving performance of workers if they simply provided offices
Here, a reader might construe that they serves to refer to workers.
Since the intended referent for they is companies, eliminate D.
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Firstly, as usual Mitch you are the best in explaining every tiny detail.Thanks for that.GMATGuruNY wrote:Errors in D:akash singhal wrote: Please explain in a bit detail why E and Not D.
Idiom problem or adjective issue?or both?
could save as much as $58 billion in employee illness prevention
Here, the conveyed meaning is that a PARTICULAR COST -- the cost of illness prevention -- could be reduced by $58 billion.
The intended meaning of the original sentence is that TOTAL COSTS could be reduced by $58 billion and that preventing illness is HOW these total costs could be reduced.
Since D does not convey the intended meaning, eliminate D.
through improving performance of workers
Interpretation 1: COMPANIES will be IMPROVING the performance of workers.
Interpretation 2: The PERFORMANCE of workers will be IMPROVING on its own.
Since the intended meaning is not crystal clear, eliminate D.
improving performance of workers if they simply provided offices
Here, a reader might construe that they serves to refer to workers.
Since the intended referent for they is companies, eliminate D.
Next, in D and E the use of the word "improving" and "improved", Is there any fact on when one should opt for past participle and when opt for present participle???
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The following construction will allow for more than one interpretation -- as discussed in my post above -- and thus is not viable:akash singhal wrote:
Firstly, as usual Mitch you are the best in explaining every tiny detail.Thanks for that.
Next, in D and E the use of the word "improving" and "improved", Is there any fact on when one should opt for past participle and when opt for present participle???
through + VERBing + NOUN.
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