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Doctors generally agree that such factors (source: sc1000)

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Doctors generally agree that such factors (source: sc1000)

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    8. Doctors generally agree that such factors as cigarette smoking, eating rich foods high in fats, and alcohol consumption [url]not only do damage by themselves but also aggravate[/url] genetic predispositions toward certain diseases.

      (A) not only do damage by themselves but also aggravate

      (B) do damage by themselves but also are aggravating to

      (C) are damaging by themselves but also are aggravating

      (D) not only do damage by themselves, they are also aggravating to

      (E) are doing damage by themselves, and they are also aggravating

    OA is A

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    Post Tue Mar 30, 2010 12:41 am
    This tests Idiom. not only..but also
    that being said, the elements inside should be parallel too.
    for eg u cannot have an infinitive next to not only and a verb after but also.
    U need to keep things parallel in an idiom too.

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    Post Tue Mar 30, 2010 1:02 am
    Not only X but also Y
    X and Y should be parallel

    Only A follow it

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    Post Tue Mar 30, 2010 1:11 am
    fx678 wrote:
    8. Doctors generally agree that such factors as cigarette smoking, eating rich foods high in fats, and alcohol consumption [url]not only do damage by themselves but also aggravate[/url] genetic predispositions toward certain diseases.

      (A) not only do damage by themselves but also aggravate
    correct
      (B) do damage by themselves but also are aggravating to
    not llel and unidiomatic
      (C) are damaging by themselves but also are aggravating
    unidiomatic
      (D) not only do damage by themselves, they are also aggravating to
    unidiomatic
      (E) are doing damage by themselves, and they are also aggravating
    doing damage is wordier .....they has no clear ref
    OA is A

    idiom or paralism?

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    Post Wed Aug 24, 2011 12:16 pm
    A) Doctors generally agree that such factors as cigarette smoking, eating rich foods high in fats, and alcohol consumption not only do damage by themselves but also aggravate genetic predispositions toward certain disease.

    Shouldn't the three elements

    cigarette smoking

    eating rich foods

    alcohol consumption

    be parallel? I think they aren't? shouldn't it be e.g. "eating of rich foods" so that the expression acts as a noun?

    thx

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    Post Sat Nov 19, 2011 11:03 am
    fx678 wrote:
    8. Doctors generally agree that such factors as cigarette smoking, eating rich foods high in fats, and alcohol consumption [url]not only do damage by themselves but also aggravate[/url] genetic predispositions toward certain diseases.

      (A) not only do damage by themselves but also aggravate

      (B) do damage by themselves but also are aggravating to

      (C) are damaging by themselves but also are aggravating

      (D) not only do damage by themselves, they are also aggravating to

      (E) are doing damage by themselves, and they are also aggravating

    OA is A

    idiom or paralism?
    Hi guys, I have a question about the firstly non-underlined part of the sentence, i.e. "such factors as cigarette smoking, eating rich foods high in fats, and alcohol consumption".
    Is the parallelism among a complex gerund (cigarette smoking), a simple gerund (eating rich foods high in fats), and an action noun (alcohol consumption) correct?
    As far as I know only a complex gerund can be parallel to an action noun. Hence either the sentence is incorrect or "eating rich foods ... " is a complex gerund.
    Help me please.
    Note: definition of complex and simple gerund is explained in MGMAT sentence correction book.

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