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The topic is:-
"Leisure time is becoming an increasingly rare commodity largely
because technology has failed to achieve its goal of improving our
efficiency in our daily Pursuits"
Discuss the exent to whicb you agree or disagree with the foregoing
statement, Support your persPective using reasons and/or examples
from your experience, observation' reading, or acadcmic studies
the essay is attached.
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