About twice a month, enough evidence having accumulated, the police would feel obliged to stage a raid.
(A) About twice a month, enough evidence having accumulated,
(B) About twice a month, when enough evidence had been accumulated,
(C) About twice a month, on having accumulated enough evidence,
(D) Twice a month, having accumulated enough evidence,
(E) Having accumulated enough evidence about twice a month,
OA is C I think it should be B. Can someone explain why my choice is bad. OA looks awkward.
About twice a month
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check grammar before check meaning logic or die
check grammar
"having done" never follow a noun. A is out
"when ..had been.., would" can not go together. B is out
check meaning logic
"accumulated... twice a month..." is not logic. "twice a month" should refers to "obliged to stage". E is out
C and D are left. I really do not know, "on" is not needed"
IMO D
check grammar
"having done" never follow a noun. A is out
"when ..had been.., would" can not go together. B is out
check meaning logic
"accumulated... twice a month..." is not logic. "twice a month" should refers to "obliged to stage". E is out
C and D are left. I really do not know, "on" is not needed"
IMO D