updated profile. please review!

[abhinandan90]

10th: 94%
12th: 85%
undergraduation: B.Tech(computer Science)7.25(from top 10 college in india)
gmat: 700
ielts: 8.5

educational achievements:
1. consistent grades during school
2. several academic merit certificates and endowments
3. worked on a mobile application project for the college website
4. computer knowledge: c++, java, asp.net ,html, oracle, sql
5. working on a project/research funded by the college in artificial inteliigence


extra curricular achievements:
1. have played volleyball, cricket, football for school at regional/national level
2. actively participated in sports during college
3. have won several debates, essay writing and extempore competitions at school/ college level
4. been awarded individual championships in cultural activites
5. been part of the student council in school since 8th grade
6. member of sponsorship and publicity committees for 2 college fests
7. core organizing committee memeber of 2 college events

social work:
1. taken part in various campaigns for peta, tfi and helpage india
2. successfully helped my college collaborate with peta and aiesec

internships:
4 different internships spread over 6 months from 1 month to 2 months each in different companies working in different sectors and positions , hence, obtaining a wide variety of practical knowledge.

career goals :
a human resources type of job profile will suit me best but i'd settle for anything that pays best and, in the process learn and understand the job . i do not know how to put this in a very amicable manner, if there is any. but my dream is to be an entrepreneur/philanthropist.
i am planning to apply for the Masters in Management 2012. i have short listed the following universities: hec, lbs, duke, lse, warwick, imperial, hult, city university, em lyon

[Jon@Admissionado]

Your numbers are good, but coming from India very "middle of the road", so you are gonna get in or not get in in my opinion based on how amazing, unique impassioned and interesting a profile you present in your essays, recommendations and interview. You need to do all that you can to get away forma "run of the mill" profile, and make yourself shine like a diamond to secure as many admits as possible.

Also, think long and hard about which goals you want to present to the Adcom.


Best to ya!