The hognose snake puts on an impressive bluff, hissing and rearing back, broadens the flesh behind its head the way a cobra does, feigning repeated strikes, but, having no dangerous fangs and no venom, eventually, if its
pursuer is not cowed by the performance, will fall over and play dead.
A. broadens the flesh behind its head the way a cobra does, feigning repeated strikes, but, having no dangerous fangs and no venom,
B. broadens the flesh behind its head the way a cobra does and feigns repeated strikes, but with no dangerous fangs and no venom,
C. broadening the flesh behind its head the way a cobra does and feigning repeated strikes, but it has no dangerous fangs and no venom, and
D. broadening the flesh behind its head the way a cobra does and feigns repeated strikes, but with no dangerous fangs and no venom, and
E. broadening the flesh behind its head the way a cobra does, feigning repeated strikes, but with no dangerous fangs and no venom, and
Can we say
The hognose snake puts on an impressive bluff, hissing and rearing back,broadening the flesh behind its head the way a cobra does and feigning repeated strikes, but it has no dangerous fangs and no venom, and
hissing...., broadening....---------describes how snake puts an impressive bluff.
But can we have long modifiers , they are also not seperated by 'and ' between them.
Can we have long moodifers describing how 'The hognose snake puts on an impressive bluff'??
I thought long modifiers are not usually preferred
Can someone explain how C is correct
The hognose snake puts on an impressive bluff
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C IMO.
There is a sequence of things describing the bluff the snake puts on and it is best described in parallel.
Now, broadening ( _____), feigning (________) is parallel.
Also after that you have but with no dangerous fangs and no venom which should modify the snake, or have a pronoun referring the snake. Only C has this clear structure.
There is a sequence of things describing the bluff the snake puts on and it is best described in parallel.
Now, broadening ( _____), feigning (________) is parallel.
Also after that you have but with no dangerous fangs and no venom which should modify the snake, or have a pronoun referring the snake. Only C has this clear structure.
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In A and B, PUTS and BROADENS imply a series of two distinct actions, but the intended meaning of the sentence is that these two actions happen AT THE SAME TIME. To convey CONTEMPORANEOUS action, the present participle (VERBing) is needed: the hognose snake puts on a bluff...BROADENING the flesh behind its head. Eliminate A and B.abcgmat wrote:The hognose snake puts on an impressive bluff, hissing and rearing back, broadens the flesh behind its head the way a cobra does, feigning repeated strikes, but, having no dangerous fangs and no venom, eventually, if its
pursuer is not cowed by the performance, will fall over and play dead.
A. broadens the flesh behind its head the way a cobra does, feigning repeated strikes, but, having no dangerous fangs and no venom,
B. broadens the flesh behind its head the way a cobra does and feigns repeated strikes, but with no dangerous fangs and no venom,
C. broadening the flesh behind its head the way a cobra does and feigning repeated strikes, but it has no dangerous fangs and no venom, and
D. broadening the flesh behind its head the way a cobra does and feigns repeated strikes, but with no dangerous fangs and no venom, and
E. broadening the flesh behind its head the way a cobra does, feigning repeated strikes, but with no dangerous fangs and no venom, and
Can we say
The hognose snake puts on an impressive bluff, hissing and rearing back,broadening the flesh behind its head the way a cobra does and feigning repeated strikes, but it has no dangerous fangs and no venom, and
hissing...., broadening....---------describes how snake puts an impressive bluff.
But can we have long modifiers , they are also not seperated by 'and ' between them.
Can we have long moodifers describing how 'The hognose snake puts on an impressive bluff'??
I thought long modifiers are not usually preferred
Can someone explain how C is correct
In D, broadening and feigns are not parallel. Eliminate D.
In E, the list of actions is not parallel: broadening...feigning...and will fall over. Eliminate E.
The correct answer is C.
In C, the actions are parallel:
...HISSING and rearing, BROADENING...and FEIGNING...
...but it HAS...and will FALL OVER and PLAY dead.
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Here's my take on this question:
Clause 1 (independent clause) - The hognose snake puts on an impressive bluff
Mod1 - Hissing & Rearing back
Mod2 - Broadening the flesh....
Mod3 - Feigning repeated strikes
Clause 2 - But it has no ...... (subject and verb - Independent clause)
Mod 1 and Mod 3 are both end modifiers (participial), and hence need to refer back to the subject/action of the preceding clause - snake/snake putting on an impressive bluff.
In this special construction, Mod 2 refers back to Mod 1 - This can be arrived at by remembering that for more than 2 parallel items, we need to insert an AND. Since there is no AND in the list of Mod1, Mod2 and Mod3, one of them needs to refer back to another modifier. The only logical one is Mod2.
Only Choice C exhibits all the understood rules of parallelism and modifiers
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Clause 1 (independent clause) - The hognose snake puts on an impressive bluff
Mod1 - Hissing & Rearing back
Mod2 - Broadening the flesh....
Mod3 - Feigning repeated strikes
Clause 2 - But it has no ...... (subject and verb - Independent clause)
Mod 1 and Mod 3 are both end modifiers (participial), and hence need to refer back to the subject/action of the preceding clause - snake/snake putting on an impressive bluff.
In this special construction, Mod 2 refers back to Mod 1 - This can be arrived at by remembering that for more than 2 parallel items, we need to insert an AND. Since there is no AND in the list of Mod1, Mod2 and Mod3, one of them needs to refer back to another modifier. The only logical one is Mod2.
Only Choice C exhibits all the understood rules of parallelism and modifiers
This question gives a new meaning to the concepts of parallelism and modifiers
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In A and B, PUTS and BROADENS imply a series of two distinct actions, but the intended meaning of the sentence is that these two actions happen AT THE SAME TIME. To convey CONTEMPORANEOUS action, the present participle (VERBing) is needed: the hognose snake puts on a bluff...BROADENING the flesh behind its head. Eliminate A and B.
In D, broadening and feigns are not parallel. Eliminate D.
In E, the list of actions is not parallel: broadening...feigning...and will fall over. Eliminate E.
The correct answer is C.
In C, the actions are parallel:
...HISSING and rearing, BROADENING...and FEIGNING...
...but it HAS...and will FALL OVER and PLAY dead.
Can someone kindly elaborate a bit more on this last piece... is it that "but it HAS" breaking the verb-ing parallel sequence and thereby maintaining the ||ism ?
Thanks!
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Hi ani781,
There are actually 2 different verb-related grammar rules in this SC:
1) The "3 item list" that begins with the verb "hissing....": so the other 2 items in the list have to have the same "format" (-ing verbs). Here, the verbs "broadening..." and "feigning...." are necessary.
2) The word "but" introduces a new clause to the sentence, and that clause does not need to follow the same parallelism in the list.
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There are actually 2 different verb-related grammar rules in this SC:
1) The "3 item list" that begins with the verb "hissing....": so the other 2 items in the list have to have the same "format" (-ing verbs). Here, the verbs "broadening..." and "feigning...." are necessary.
2) The word "but" introduces a new clause to the sentence, and that clause does not need to follow the same parallelism in the list.
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As always , Thanks a LOT Rich. So the takeaway is , for parallelism of this kind ( verb-ing, verb-ing ... verb-ing) always make sure that these constructs are in the same clause. Correct ?
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Hi ani781,
You are absolutely correct. You're turning into a real killer.
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You are absolutely correct. You're turning into a real killer.
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