It was because she was plagued by injuries that tennis celebrity Tracy Austin, who won the Italian and U.S. Opens at age 16 in 1979, sat out the years between 1984 to 1988, occasionally working as a television commentator.
(A) It was because she was plagued by injuries that tennis celebrity Tracy Austin, who won the Italian and U.S. Opens at age 16 in 1979, sat out the years between
(B) After winning the Italian and U.S. Opens in 1979 at the age of 16, injuries plagued tennis celebrity Tracy Austin and forced her to sit out from
(C) Tracy Austin, the tennis celebrity who, plagued by injuries, won the Italian and U.S. Opens at age 16 in 1979, sat out from
(D) Plagued by injuries, tennis celebrity Tracy Austin, who won the Italian and U.S. Opens at age 16 in 1979, sat out the years from
(E) Tennis celebrity Tracy Austin, who won the Italian and U.S. Opens at age 16 in 1979, was plagued by injuries when she sat out between
Whats wrong with A
OA is D
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i think the placement of " who" and " comma" after that is wrong .Abdulla wrote:Me too I need explanation why c wrong?
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1. (C) is wrong because the comma after WHO and comma after INJURIES are unnecessary.(C) Tracy Austin, the tennis celebrity who, plagued by injuries, won the Italian and U.S. Opens at age 16 in 1979, sat out from
2. If we remove the comma then the meaning of the sentence is distorted. So, to retain the meaning we need comma over here. But commas instead of making the sentence simple, introduces further ambiguity to the sentence.
3. In (C), it is unclear that whether she won the title during injury or after injury.
Check the both option below. (D) has very clear meaning over the (C). It simply states that injury occurred after winning the title that force her to do commentary instead of playing further tennis.
Incorrect Option wrote: Tracy Austin, the tennis celebrity who, plagued by injuries, won the Italian and U.S. Opens at age 16 in 1979, sat out from 1984 to 1988, occasionally working as a television commentator.
Correct Option wrote: Plagued by injuries, tennis celebrity Tracy Austin, who won the Italian and U.S. Opens at age 16 in 1979, sat out the years from 1984 to 1988, occasionally working as a television commentator.
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Plagued by injuries, tennis celebrity Tracy Austin, who won the Italian and U.S. Opens at age 16 in 1979, sat out the years from 1984 to 1988, occasionally working as a television commentator.
Please correct me if i am wrong..
but shouldn't modifier be placed like this...
i Think the usage of modifier in D is incorrect...
Plagued by injuries, Tracy Austin, tennis celebrity, who won the Italian and U.S. Opens at age 16 in 1979, sat out the years from 1984 to 1988, occasionally working as a television commentator.
Please correct me if i am wrong..
but shouldn't modifier be placed like this...
i Think the usage of modifier in D is incorrect...
Plagued by injuries, Tracy Austin, tennis celebrity, who won the Italian and U.S. Opens at age 16 in 1979, sat out the years from 1984 to 1988, occasionally working as a television commentator.
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(A) It was because she was plagued by injuries that tennis celebrity Tracy Austin, who won the Italian and U.S. Opens at age 16 in 1979, sat out the years between
-> Incorrect Idiom
(B) After winning the Italian and U.S. Opens in 1979 at the age of 16, injuries plagued tennis celebrity Tracy Austin and forced her to sit out from
-> Modifier Issue
(C) Tracy Austin, the tennis celebrity who, plagued by injuries, won the Italian and U.S. Opens at age 16 in 1979, sat out from
-> Modifier Issue
(D) Plagued by injuries, tennis celebrity Tracy Austin, who won the Italian and U.S. Opens at age 16 in 1979, sat out the years from
(E) Tennis celebrity Tracy Austin, who won the Italian and U.S. Opens at age 16 in 1979, was plagued by injuries when she sat out between
-> Incorrect Idiom
-> Incorrect Idiom
(B) After winning the Italian and U.S. Opens in 1979 at the age of 16, injuries plagued tennis celebrity Tracy Austin and forced her to sit out from
-> Modifier Issue
(C) Tracy Austin, the tennis celebrity who, plagued by injuries, won the Italian and U.S. Opens at age 16 in 1979, sat out from
-> Modifier Issue
(D) Plagued by injuries, tennis celebrity Tracy Austin, who won the Italian and U.S. Opens at age 16 in 1979, sat out the years from
(E) Tennis celebrity Tracy Austin, who won the Italian and U.S. Opens at age 16 in 1979, was plagued by injuries when she sat out between
-> Incorrect Idiom