show that X or show X to be Y ?

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show that X or show X to be Y ?

by tparekh » Fri Oct 17, 2008 7:08 am
Hello,

This might be a trivial question, but do we always need a "that" after
the verb show:

for e.g.:

...recent fossil discoveries in Pakistan show that whales, porpoises and tortoises are more closely related..

OR is it OK for the sentence to read as:

...recent fossil discoveries in Pakistan show whales, porpoises and tortoises to be more closely related..

thanks.

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by stop@800 » Fri Oct 17, 2008 7:31 am
With current context, I will go with show that.

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When you can omit THAT

by nitinrai » Fri Oct 17, 2008 7:59 am
you see we can use THAT in the cases which required a restrictive cluase to be mentioned or when we need to introduce a subordinate clause.

Now more on when we can omit THAT

The word that is used as a conjunction to connect a subordinate clause to a preceding verb. In this construction that is sometimes called the "expletive that." Indeed, the word is often omitted to good effect, but the very fact of easy omission causes some editors to take out the red pen and strike out the conjunction that wherever it appears. In the following sentences, we can happily omit the that (or keep it, depending on how the sentence sounds to us):

Isabel knew [that] she was about to be fired.
She definitely felt [that] her fellow employees hadn't supported her.
I hope [that] she doesn't blame me.
Sometimes omitting the that creates a break in the flow of a sentence, a break that can be adequately bridged with the use of a comma:

The problem is, that production in her department has dropped.
Remember, that we didn't have these problems before she started working here.
As a general rule, if the sentence feels just as good without the that, if no ambiguity results from its omission, if the sentence is more efficient or elegant without it, then we can safely omit the that. Theodore Bernstein lists three conditions in which we should maintain the conjunction that:

When a time element intervenes between the verb and the clause: "The boss said yesterday that production in this department was down fifty percent." (Notice the position of "yesterday.")
When the verb of the clause is long delayed: "Our annual report revealed that some losses sustained by this department in the third quarter of last year were worse than previously thought." (Notice the distance between the subject "losses" and its verb, "were.")
When a second that can clear up who said or did what: "The CEO said that Isabel's department was slacking off and that production dropped precipitously in the fourth quarter." (Did the CEO say that production dropped or was the drop a result of what he said about Isabel's department? The second that makes the sentence clear.)

But coming back to your 2 statement .... I will go with the "SHOW THAT" because the later one is NOT correctly constructed as
......show... to be........ is not good contruction

I HTH you!!!
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by tparekh » Fri Oct 17, 2008 10:37 am
A BIG Thank you to both of you for your responses (Nitin, thanks for the detailed explanation)

stop@800: you mentioned in the current context "show that" is correct, and nitin you alluded to that too.

Is there any condition where: "show .. X .. to be" is ever correct in GMAT?