Sentence correction strategy: Think “Better� not “Best

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by GMATMadeEasy » Sat Apr 30, 2011 4:40 pm
@mundasingh123 : Look carefully what elements are parallel . You can't put anything parallel.

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by David@VeritasPrep » Sat Apr 30, 2011 5:10 pm
GMATMadeEasy is right!

In this case it is "become too crowded" that needs to be parallel with "or spread." As in "become too crowded or spread." Resulting does not need to be parallel as it is a modifier.
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by vidhya16 » Sun May 01, 2011 12:21 pm
David,

It is wonderful post and suggestion. In your example sentence, I initially thought error type is parallelism. Then scanning the answer choices , I found two split "and" and "or". Upto this point , I was going fine. While trying to choose between two,I fell for the trap and choose "and".

It is very important to scan the preceding statements to choose the correct option. And also when we have 2/3 split, probability of greater split wins most of the time (in this case 3) .

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by mundasingh123 » Mon May 02, 2011 1:43 am
David@VeritasPrep wrote:GMATMadeEasy is right!

In this case it is "become too crowded" that needs to be parallel with "or spread." As in "become too crowded or spread." Resulting does not need to be parallel as it is a modifier.
So U mean modifiers cant be in parallel
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by mundasingh123 » Mon May 02, 2011 1:44 am
GMATMadeEasy wrote:@mundasingh123 : Look carefully what elements are parallel . You can't put anything parallel.
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by theachiever » Thu Nov 29, 2012 9:55 pm
Thanks a lot David.The best example I have seen so far with regard to ellimination approach in SC.That's terrific.
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by David@VeritasPrep » Fri Nov 30, 2012 4:56 am
Thanks!

I am glad that you brought this one back to the top. Probably lots of people have not seen this since 2011...
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by varun289 » Mon Feb 25, 2013 8:29 pm
thnaks for such post , yeh i do agree that GMAT test logics and one point let me share

own exp - if one improves in logic i.e CR + RC will surly help in SC tooo