One of the duties of the Securities and Exchange Commission is to guarantee that individual or small investors have the same information about the financial health of a company as do the large, institutional investors.
a. as do the large, institutional investors
b. as does the large, institutional investors
c. like the large, institutional investors
d. in addition to the large, institutional investors
e. as the large, institutional investors
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I think the answer should be E. Here's why:
[spoiler]A - awkward... as do the isn't correct
B - "does" is incorrect
C - "same... like" is unidiomatic
D - "same... in addition" is unidiomatic
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[spoiler]A - awkward... as do the isn't correct
B - "does" is incorrect
C - "same... like" is unidiomatic
D - "same... in addition" is unidiomatic
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None of the choices are sounding good..except the real usage.. as do the.. E would have been right if it was.. as the large, institutional investors do.
otherwise imo E is comparing financial health to large companies.. not the companies' fin health.
otherwise imo E is comparing financial health to large companies.. not the companies' fin health.
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choose A.
"as" cannot compare nouns, only clauses/actions/verbs, so "do" is required.
small investors have the same info as do large investors.
without do, as is used to designate "quality" or "being"
He works very hard as a student.
vs
He works very hard as do other students.
"as" cannot compare nouns, only clauses/actions/verbs, so "do" is required.
small investors have the same info as do large investors.
without do, as is used to designate "quality" or "being"
He works very hard as a student.
vs
He works very hard as do other students.
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IMO Only A could be correct here, rest choices seem wrong and unidiomatic to me.
What is OA?
What is OA?
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Good explanation. I would go with A on the real test, not E.capnx wrote:choose A.
"as" cannot compare nouns, only clauses/actions/verbs, so "do" is required.
small investors have the same info as do large investors.
without do, as is used to designate "quality" or "being"
He works very hard as a student.
vs
He works very hard as do other students.
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here what are we comparing, information or the Institution and individual investor?
looking at this still I feel A is correct?
Correct me if I am worng.
looking at this still I feel A is correct?
Correct me if I am worng.
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(a) and (e) are both grammatically ok, but (e) is ambiguous. therefore, if this problem were official - which it's most certainly not (it's a terrible question) - the correct answer would be (a).
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the story:
(e) is ambiguous.
it has 2 possible meanings:
(1) small investors have the same info about the companies' health as the larger investors have (this is clearly the intended meaning)
(2) small investors have the same info about the companies' health as they have about the larger investors.
the second is a bit strange, but you can't use "common sense" to get rid of ambiguity. if a sentence is ambiguous, it's ambiguous; tough luck.
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(a) is not ambiguous, because of the extra "do" (which is totally well placed; see next post)
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the story:
(e) is ambiguous.
it has 2 possible meanings:
(1) small investors have the same info about the companies' health as the larger investors have (this is clearly the intended meaning)
(2) small investors have the same info about the companies' health as they have about the larger investors.
the second is a bit strange, but you can't use "common sense" to get rid of ambiguity. if a sentence is ambiguous, it's ambiguous; tough luck.
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(a) is not ambiguous, because of the extra "do" (which is totally well placed; see next post)
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to whoever said this:
it is completely ok to have helping verbs before the noun in the 2nd half of a parallel construction such as this one.
in fact, it's not only ok, it's often REQUIRED.
example:
i know more about shakespeare than my brother
--> incorrect. ambiguous. we can't tell whether this means "i know more about shakespeare than my brother knows about shakespeare" (the presumably intended meaning) or "i know more about shakespeare than i know about my brother".
i know more about shakespeare than my brother does
i know more about shakespeare than does my brother
--> both correct.
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i know more about shakespeare than my brother, who has never taken a course in british literature
--> incorrect. ambiguous.
for the same reason as above.
i know more about shakespeare than my brother, who has never taken a course in british literature, does
--> incorrect. can't separate "my brother" from the HELPING VERB "does" with a modifier this long.
i know more about shakespeare than my brother does, who has never taken a course in british literature
--> incorrect. you can NEVER separate a noun from a "comma + who/which" modifier.
i know more about shakespeare than does my brother, who has never taken a course in british literature
--> correct.
this is the ONLY place where it's acceptable to put this "does".
for the same reason, "as do the..." is the best way to write (a), since it resolves the ambiguity and is properly placed.
whoa, no. totally wrong.as do the isn't correct
it is completely ok to have helping verbs before the noun in the 2nd half of a parallel construction such as this one.
in fact, it's not only ok, it's often REQUIRED.
example:
i know more about shakespeare than my brother
--> incorrect. ambiguous. we can't tell whether this means "i know more about shakespeare than my brother knows about shakespeare" (the presumably intended meaning) or "i know more about shakespeare than i know about my brother".
i know more about shakespeare than my brother does
i know more about shakespeare than does my brother
--> both correct.
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i know more about shakespeare than my brother, who has never taken a course in british literature
--> incorrect. ambiguous.
for the same reason as above.
i know more about shakespeare than my brother, who has never taken a course in british literature, does
--> incorrect. can't separate "my brother" from the HELPING VERB "does" with a modifier this long.
i know more about shakespeare than my brother does, who has never taken a course in british literature
--> incorrect. you can NEVER separate a noun from a "comma + who/which" modifier.
i know more about shakespeare than does my brother, who has never taken a course in british literature
--> correct.
this is the ONLY place where it's acceptable to put this "does".
for the same reason, "as do the..." is the best way to write (a), since it resolves the ambiguity and is properly placed.
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