Hi there, I hold no expertise in evaluating the Essays, but from what I read, I thought that you may have missed the point- "contrast between present day students who cannot express themselves through their writing abilities in quantitative thinking (even though they have personal computers) an...

I agree with the post above. The argument is nicely articulated; however, it lacks cohesiveness. I would suggest you follow some sort of template where you first outline the assumptions that can poke holes into the argument, then you use the present evidence to somewhat strengthen the argument and l...

Rahul, Nice essay; strong points; solid examples; however, I could not understand whether you agreed or disagreed with the present issue. Usually, I have noticed Kaplan, Princeton, and other books preach to explicitly state one's viewpoint in the opening paragraph as a thesis statement. You did ment...

please rate and point out corrections. Dude, I like your essay. Your thought process with the concrete examples are insightful. As others on the forum have suggested, if you could just cut down a little bit on the quantity and focus a little extra on quality, then 6 is within your reach. Best of Lu...

Very nicely formulated ideas. I like how you started with an introductory sentence and later on presented the agree/disagreement part of the issue.

Also, the example cited proved the point that you were trying to make.

kanha81

Time SUCKER- consecutive integers

x is the sum of y consecutive integers. w is the sum of z consecutive integers. If y = 2z, and y and z are both positive integers, then each of the following could be true EXCEPT x = w x > w x/y is an integer w/z is an integer x/z is an integer How do you solve such problems within 2 minute time lim...

IMO E The argument is, out of the total number of ppl switching states, the proportion going to SunState has decreased by 10% But if the total number of ppl itself has increased overall, assuming the same proportion (with the 10% decrease) going to SunState, the actual number of ppl going to SunSta...

Re: Border patrol station

The rules of engagement under which a border patrol station can decide to use deadly force includes responding to an invasionary incursion and the return of hostile fire. A. includes responding to an invasionary incursion and the return of B. includes responding to an invasionary incursion and retu...