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Hi All, Would really appreciate feedback on my issue essay. This is the second one I have put up but never received any feedback on either. Getting your opinion on the poll would really help me analyze how much more I need to put into this and expert opinion would help me focus my efforts. I only ha...

by laumsd

Sun Jul 25, 2010 11:08 pm
Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
Topic: Analysis of Issue- Please rate! Expert opinion requested
Replies: 1
Views: 756

Andrea - THANK YOU so very much for your advice. Its all very very helpful and focuses my efforts to improve my score. Will put up a new improved essay in a couple days and would really really appreciate any feedback you could provide then. This test has been a little nerve wrecking so thank you for...

by laumsd

Sun Jul 25, 2010 10:55 pm
Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
Topic: Analysis of Argument - Please rate! Expert opinion requested
Replies: 2
Views: 928

Analysis of Issue- Please rate! Expert opinion requested

ESSAY QUESTION: “Companies should be prohibited from monitoring e-mail correspondence of their employees, since this policy destroys the atmosphere of trust and undermines employee morale.� From your perspective, how accurate is the above statement? Support your position with reasons and/or exam...

by laumsd

Sat Jul 24, 2010 10:35 am
Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
Topic: Analysis of Issue- Please rate! Expert opinion requested
Replies: 1
Views: 756

Analysis of Argument - Please rate! Expert opinion requested

ESSAY QUESTION: The following appeared in the editorial section of a local newspaper: “The inflow of immigrant workers into our community has put a downward pressure on wages. In fact, the average compensation of unskilled labor in our city has declined by nearly 10% over the past 5 years. Therefo...

by laumsd

Sat Jul 24, 2010 10:34 am
Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
Topic: Analysis of Argument - Please rate! Expert opinion requested
Replies: 2
Views: 928

Im about a year too late but this template is excellent!

Congratulations on your 6 and hope this template will at least get me to a 5 :)

Thanks!

by laumsd

Wed Jul 21, 2010 12:36 am
Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
Topic: Argument essay template, if anyone wants it
Replies: 113
Views: 444808

You should insert a poll - it makes it much easier.

I would give you a 5

by laumsd

Wed Jul 21, 2010 12:34 am
Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
Topic: 1st attempt at Argument_please rate_test in 4 days_yikkes!
Replies: 5
Views: 1125

AWA Analysis of an Issue Essay - Please rate using the poll.

Dear All, This is my first attempt at AWA essays so I would really appreciate any feedback and ratings. I later went through a lot of the tips and old essays so I hope my next attempt will be better but would also appreciate a rating on this so I know where to focus my efforts! You can use the poll ...

by laumsd

Tue Jul 20, 2010 4:17 am
Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
Topic: AWA Analysis of an Issue Essay - Please rate using the poll.
Replies: 0
Views: 1187

AWA Analysis of Argument Essay - Please rate using the poll.

Dear All, This is my first attempt at AWA essays so I would really appreciate any feedback and ratings. I later went through a lot of the tips and old essays so I hope my next attempt will be better but would also appreciate a rating on this so I know where to focus my efforts! You can use the poll ...

by laumsd

Tue Jul 20, 2010 2:17 am
Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
Topic: AWA Analysis of Argument Essay - Please rate using the poll.
Replies: 0
Views: 768