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- by nsrikanthshetty
Tue May 15, 2012 12:34 pm- Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
- Topic: Please review AWA argument - (Falling revenues)
- Replies: 1
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Sorry to say but the response sounds like you are attempting a Analysis of Issue as you provide examples to the failure scenarios and further provide explanation.
I may be wrong but the emphasis should not be on explaining in detail but rather list out and pinpoint the weaknesses of the argument.
- by nsrikanthshetty
Tue May 15, 2012 12:01 pm- Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
- Topic: Kindly rate AWA-Argument
- Replies: 2
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None of the choices are sounding good..except the real usage.. as do the.. E would have been right if it was.. as the large, institutional investors do.
otherwise imo E is comparing financial health to large companies.. not the companies' fin health.
- by nsrikanthshetty
Sat Aug 22, 2009 10:34 pm- Forum: Sentence Correction
- Topic: SEC
- Replies: 15
- Views: 3887
- by nsrikanthshetty
Sat Aug 22, 2009 10:29 pm- Forum: Sentence Correction
- Topic: Oil Leak
- Replies: 34
- Views: 31164
the feature compared here is the rapid development and not the country in itself.. so like england makes a comparision between development and country which is odd..so like that of refers to the proper usage of pronoun that as demonstrative pronoun.
- by nsrikanthshetty
Sat Aug 22, 2009 10:27 pm- Forum: Sentence Correction
- Topic: Usage of That - MGMAT
- Replies: 7
- Views: 3037
isnt this part of mgmat... like should be used for comparing different kinds of things.. and as should be used for similiar things like apples to apples.
- by nsrikanthshetty
Sat Aug 22, 2009 10:24 pm- Forum: Sentence Correction
- Topic: like/as
- Replies: 9
- Views: 3077
the answer should be D as the modifier for small businesses should be near to what it is modifying. inspite of passive voice usage... the best one among choices would be D.
- by nsrikanthshetty
Sat Aug 22, 2009 10:20 pm- Forum: Sentence Correction
- Topic: Formulas
- Replies: 9
- Views: 2043
should be D.. SVO subject verb object and the statement is fragment, so this kind of sentences are rarely given on real exam i suppose.
- by nsrikanthshetty
Sat Aug 22, 2009 10:15 pm- Forum: Sentence Correction
- Topic: Level 700-800 - Corporate Welfare
- Replies: 12
- Views: 1558
why being is wordy?
cite as an.. is the proper usage rather than cite an obstacle.
"being" changes the meaning in that it makes congressional passage as the concern.. whereas the concern is the second clause related to bank loans. also being is too wordy.
- by nsrikanthshetty
Sat Aug 22, 2009 10:11 pm- Forum: Sentence Correction
- Topic: Governements
- Replies: 3
- Views: 2056