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- by himanshu4iim
Mon Aug 03, 2009 10:17 am- Forum: I just Beat The GMAT!
- Topic: Got 730 (96 percentile)
- Replies: 2
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Please rate my Essay.. gmat after 1 week
“Since no business can be all things at once, companies that specialize in one product or service are more efficient than those that offer a diverse product mix.” From your perspective, how accurate is the above statement? Support your position with reasons and/or examples from your own experience, ...
- by himanshu4iim
Sun Jul 26, 2009 12:14 pm- Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
- Topic: Please rate my Essay.. gmat after 1 week
- Replies: 0
- Views: 1113
My own essay on same topic.. please rate this too
“It is unrealistic to expect individual nations to make, independently, the sacrifices necessary to conserve energy. International leadership and worldwide cooperation are essential if we expect to protect the world’s energy resources for future generations.” Discuss the extent to which you agree or...
- by himanshu4iim
Sun Jul 26, 2009 11:13 am- Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
- Topic: Please rate my essay
- Replies: 3
- Views: 2233
I will give it 4 out of 6
I made some observations which might be useful to you. In introduction, as per my understanding, GMAT requires you to take a firm opinion on the issue. Then you should support your opinion with details in subsequent paragraphs. Finally you should conclude by summarising your points. I felt that you ...
- by himanshu4iim
Fri Jul 24, 2009 3:20 am- Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
- Topic: Issue - Kindly rate my essay and provide inputs
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1506
Nice essay
You have written a well thought essay. Congratulations on that. I have one observation which may be helpful to you. Your conclusion does not summarise what points you refered to in the supporting details section. The conclusion and introduction look the same. You could have written that "Incorp...
- by himanshu4iim
Fri Jul 24, 2009 3:08 am- Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
- Topic: Rate my AI
- Replies: 1
- Views: 1317
Nice content but a weak conclusion
I would give it 6 for content, 5 for structure and 5 for writing style.
I felt that the conclusion does not properly and concisely summarise the supporting details of your essay.
Sometimes I felt that the sentences could have been shortened a bit.
- by himanshu4iim
Fri Jul 24, 2009 2:52 am- Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
- Topic: Exam fast approaching - please evaluate (argument)
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1805