Please Grade my Essay. This is my first take on an AWA essay. If you have any feedback please let me know.

The following appeared as part of the business plan of the Capital Idea investment firm: “Across town in the Park Hill district, the Thespian Theater, Pizzazz Pizza, and the Niblick Golf Club have all had business increases over the past two years. Capital Idea should therefore invest in the Roxy P...