Kindly evaluate my profile for NUS

Kindly evaluate my profile. Mallika Tandon,female,23years old, Indian. B.Com Graduate, 2016 10th-93.1 12th-94.4 B.com-81%(stood first in my college for 3 years in a row) GMAT-660 (Q-49 V-31) Work experience- 2 years 8 months of working as a Marketing Associate in an Education Consultancy firm. Leadi...