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You have some grammar mistakes like this one - "because it did not states more information regarding the composition". You need to write it like this - "because it does not state more information regarding the composition". But otherwise good structure of an essay. And you made a...

by donnaprimadonna

Tue Nov 29, 2016 6:15 am
Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
Topic: please rate my essay. Thanks a lot!
Replies: 1
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I think your essay has a good structure and logical statements but there was a part of sentence at the end "current economic needs." that was unnecessary in the essay. And I was a little bit confused by this part "Because the argument leaves out critical data needed to help corporatio...

by donnaprimadonna

Tue Nov 29, 2016 6:12 am
Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
Topic: Feedback please
Replies: 1
Views: 2380

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by donnaprimadonna

Tue Nov 29, 2016 6:05 am
Forum: GMAT Essays (AWA)
Topic: awaprofessor.com essay rater - good?
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Views: 5408
by donnaprimadonna

Tue Nov 29, 2016 5:55 am
Forum: Lounge
Topic: The Princeton Review - Manya Abroad GMAT prep
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