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GMAT SC- EGMAT: Parallelism

ESA's Venus orbiter recently captured the first infrared radiation map,suggesting that Venus may have had a watery past and that the highlands of Venus' southern hemisphere resemble granite,the same material that makes up terrestrial continents This is a correct version of a sentence in an egmat qui...

by Wallstreettarzan

Mon Dec 01, 2014 2:41 pm
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: GMAT SC- EGMAT: Parallelism
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by Wallstreettarzan

Sat Oct 04, 2014 1:01 am
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: soar!
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[edited since first written] in general, 1 * if you have than/as + subject + FORM OF "TO BE" as the second half of a comparison, then you must have another form of "to be" in the first half of the comparison. or, there should be something in the first half that would make sense ...

by Wallstreettarzan

Fri Oct 03, 2014 3:05 am
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: soar!
Replies: 51
Views: 30530

Many house builders offer rent-to-buy programs which enable a family with insufficient savings for a conventional down payment to move into new housing, applying part of the rent to a purchase later. I think this should be a valid usage of participle form..Also the sentence makes sense.. Can some ex...

by Wallstreettarzan

Sun May 25, 2014 3:38 am
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: modifier issue expert
Replies: 53
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