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thinking more generally— the above is a good example of why functional thinking is superior to "classification" into rigid categories. namely, thinking about "actions" is better than worrying about whether said actions are technically verbs. in fact, in the "blue sentence...

by magic monkey

Sat Oct 25, 2014 10:45 pm
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: modifier issue expert
Replies: 53
Views: 25459

In GMAC materials, you'll routinely encounter sentences like the blue one. Although the orange sentence is technically ok, I very highly doubt that you would ever see anything like it in an official sentence, since it's stylistically poor writing. So, if you need a guessing method , you're probably...

by magic monkey

Fri Oct 17, 2014 10:55 pm
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: modifier issue expert
Replies: 53
Views: 25459

So is it correct to say that GMAT would most likely to avoid structures like "SVO, which clause, doing"? Too abstract for me. Can you write an actual example that looks like this? Thanks. is it ok to write like this: (from your examples, sorry i am not capable of writing a better example)...

by magic monkey

Fri Sep 12, 2014 2:18 am
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: modifier issue expert
Replies: 53
Views: 25459

In the problem you've cited, the whole issue is a non-issue, because NO modifier makes sense. In that context, "applying... is something that happens later . It's not something that happens in the same timeframe as "moving in", and it is most certainly not a description of the move-i...

by magic monkey

Thu Sep 04, 2014 8:10 pm
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: modifier issue expert
Replies: 53
Views: 25459

if we change the relative that clause into an comma which clause, would "breaking" still modifies "I dropped a bag", or only the "comma which clause", just grammatically. Like in the following sentence, "i dropped a bag containing six incubators, which enclosed ba...

by magic monkey

Tue Sep 02, 2014 1:52 pm
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: modifier issue expert
Replies: 53
Views: 25459

keep in mind that you're looking at *wrong* answers here. in the two choices (d) and (e), "applying..." shouldn't be a modifier at all, because it doesn't actually *modify* anything in the preceding clause -- it gives another, separate aspect of the programs. (number one, the families can...

by magic monkey

Fri Aug 29, 2014 4:25 am
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: modifier issue expert
Replies: 53
Views: 25459

Hi Stacey, I notice that we could use if like I don't know if Jack will come to attend the meeting tonight . According to your analysis, do you mean that in the formal written English we could only use if in conditional clause, and whether in optional clause? A whether -clause can serve as noun. An...

by magic monkey

Sun Jul 13, 2014 12:14 am
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: A proposal has been made to trim the horns from rhinoceroses
Replies: 27
Views: 20129

Received a PM asking me to respond. This is an OG question, so I can't discuss directly. I'm going to discuss some other random stuff that may or may not bear a close resemblance to this problem. :) "whether" vs. "if" Most people use "if" these days when they should be...

by magic monkey

Sat Jul 12, 2014 4:06 am
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: A proposal has been made to trim the horns from rhinoceroses
Replies: 27
Views: 20129

It can describe turns. They took turns. — Turns doing what? / What kind of turns? Turns drawing xxxxx stuff Hello Ron, I came across another sentence: In the mid-1920’s the Hawthorne Works of the Western Electric Company was the scene of an intensive series of experiments investigating the effe...

by magic monkey

Thu Jul 10, 2014 8:03 pm
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: COMMA+-ING Vs noun modifier
Replies: 30
Views: 11557

Thanks Ron, I have got the point. Please don't feel annoyed if I want to make a double check on another construction - the "comma + _ed". So when we are using the comma Ved, it doesn't have to follow the 2nd rule above, which is, to have a relationship to the whole idea of the sentence. T...

by magic monkey

Sun Jul 06, 2014 8:32 pm
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: COMMA+-ING Vs noun modifier
Replies: 30
Views: 11557

E.g., Roberta, having just finished her first marathon, collapsed onto the floor. Here, "having..." just describes Roberta. However, it still needs to have a fundamental relationship to the following part (i.e., she collapsed because she had just run 26.2 miles). • Describes Roberta â€...

by magic monkey

Mon Jun 30, 2014 4:27 am
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: COMMA+-ING Vs noun modifier
Replies: 30
Views: 11557

Got it, and including is actually a preposition. I know I say this way too often, but, this sort of understanding (involving classifications/categories) shouldn't be your end goal, because it's awkward and clumsy. I.e., your goal is to distinguish correct usage from incorrect usage immediately . If...

by magic monkey

Mon Jun 30, 2014 1:13 am
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: COMMA+-ING Vs noun modifier
Replies: 30
Views: 11557

There IS one exception of which you should be aware, though. Namely, if comma + __ing follows only a noun , rather than a full sentence/clause, then it modifies only that noun. (It can't do anything else!) E.g., Roberta, having just finished her first marathon, collapsed onto the floor. Here, "...

by magic monkey

Sun Jun 29, 2014 1:17 am
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: COMMA+-ING Vs noun modifier
Replies: 30
Views: 11557

This is very interesting discussion. Hello magic monkey, can you let me know why you say that the -ing forms in OG12 SC 30 and OG13 SC 62 can be interpreted as as adverbial modifiers? It seems to me that -ing forms here are directly modifying the nouns "animal-hide shields" and "the ...

by magic monkey

Sat Jun 28, 2014 6:34 pm
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: COMMA+-ING Vs noun modifier
Replies: 30
Views: 11557

You're right. Recently, I found OE contradictory to itself from place to place. • Yes, there is a "comma + __ing" that can attach to a noun. E.g., Valéry, engrossed in his book, did not notice that his plane was leaving. "Engrossed in his book" clearly describes Valéry. Still...

by magic monkey

Sat Jun 28, 2014 4:53 pm
Forum: Sentence Correction
Topic: COMMA+-ING Vs noun modifier
Replies: 30
Views: 11557