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by khurram » Wed Feb 27, 2008 3:02 pm
Popular Child Pyschologists have advocated that parents discipline male children similarly to the fashion in which they discipline daughters.

Most likey choices

D as they would discipline
E as they would

Ans is E

How does D change the sentence of the meaning, I think it sounds better than E.

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by AleksandrM » Thu Feb 28, 2008 10:55 am
I think this is just a difference between a longer and a more concise way of expressing something. Since the second choice does not change the meaning but is shorter than the first, it is the better choice of the two. Watch out for ones like this one, they appear here and there. For example, you would not say "They treat them as they do fish, as they do lions, as they do bears, and as they do tigers." Instead, you would say "They treat them as they do fish, lions, bears, and tigers." Also notice that you do not need to say "They treat them as they treat fish...." you can simly say "do."

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by mikeCoolBoy » Mon May 25, 2009 10:37 am
I've come across this question today and as khurram says Kaplan's explanation is that D changes the meaning of the sentence.

Could someone explain how it changes the meaning?
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by axat » Mon May 25, 2009 11:41 am
D says the parents treat the boys as 'they' would discipline daughters. Here, 'they' could mean the boys. So the parent will discipline the boys as the boys discipline daughters.

With E though, because of ellipsis, 'they' refers to the parents.

You could also pick E over D because it's less wordy.

It's about picking the best shade of grey.

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by mikeCoolBoy » Mon May 25, 2009 11:46 am
Got it, thank you.

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by rahulg83 » Tue May 26, 2009 10:18 am
With E though, because of ellipsis, 'they' refers to the parents.


Hey axat, can u enlighten this part please?