Experts, Please! Re-writing a sentence.

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Experts, Please! Re-writing a sentence.

by gmat_hunt » Thu Jul 06, 2017 1:57 pm
Hi experts,
I was seeking a way to write the following sentences in one sentence so that it saves space and looks better. I highly appreciate your valuable inputs.

During my graduate study, teaching-which introduced me to students of diverse backgrounds- was an important part of my training, and I believe this skill would be useful in your department. Before joining the graduate program, I was teaching courses on mathematics, computer science, and physics for 5 years.

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by elias.latour.apex » Fri Jul 07, 2017 6:54 am
How about:

An important part of my training during graduate study was teaching, which introduced me to students from diverse backgrounds. I believe this skill will be useful in your department. For five years before joining the graduate program, I taught courses on mathematics, computer science, and physics.
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